Need help with something

[Kurosaki Ishimaru]

Hey guys...
I know this is random but I need help on my essay...
No, you don't have to read my essay and fix grammar stuff^^
anyhow, my essay topic is about how experiences makes people different
and as examples I'm using myself, Alice from Alice in Wonderland, Ichigo and Rukia.
I'm having hard time explaining how Ichigo changes during visiting Soul Society and how Rukia changes after meeting Ichigo and spends time with him. I know it sounds sort of retarded, but hope you guys can help cause english isn't my first language so it's kinda hard for me to explain things. Anyhow, thanks if you decides to help this Korean ESL studant out...^^

[dyne]

mhm thats a bad thing to write about i think what it suppose to be like if someone hasn't something drastic happen to them like they get bullied at school so they decide that there going to bull other people or w/e what would of happened if they weren't bullied and they ended doing something completly different better or worst..i would say you non fiction characters fictional character is more like a story

[Ash]

You shouldnt use cartoon characters as examples.
- You should watch V for Vendetta, that's a perfect example of how experiences shape your life.

If anything you should use yourself as an example. You who you are because [blank] has happend to you or hasnt happend.

[Kurosaki Ishimaru]

heh... I guess I have to start my essay over again then^^ thanks

[Ash]

BTW that's got the be the coolest essay topic. I wish I would have had to write an essay like that when I was in school.

[LarryLunch]

lmao you used bleach for examples

and thats a hard one, talk about how guys become gay in prison.

[Ash]

Not so much gay as they dont care as long as they're getting some.

[Kurosaki Ishimaru]

okay... I guess I wasted like 20 hours writing essay on that...TOT I have to waste another 20 hours on rewriting the whole thing, thanks for discouraging me on trying new things... *feels miserable**hates writing essay*

[Ash]

You can write about Ichigo if you want. but I'm pretty sure your teacher would go WTF.

It's about REAL people and how REAL events shape our lives, not storybook.

[dyne]

okay... I guess I wasted like 20 hours writing essay on that...TOT I have to waste another 20 hours on rewriting the whole thing, thanks for discouraging me on trying new things... *feels miserable**hates writing essay*

YOU ASK FOR OUR HELP...what you had was garbage thats not what your ment to right...writing about fictional characters is not a real expeirence think about this hitler expeirenced critizium when his jewish teacher said his painting sucked so he went a murderored them all and tried to take over the world now what would of happened if hte jew liked his painting...how did that affect him

anytime i wrote an essay i got high marks so i know what i'm taking about and what your saying is going to barely get you a pas a c+ maybe if its extremely well written

[TGC]

Writing about bleach characters? One thing is watching it for entertainment, another thing is posting about it for the hell fo it, but doing homework on it. C'mon theres so many examples you can put without having to Bleach in it. Think about it, essays are supposed to be challenging don't write a paper about an anime. Now what you CAN do is pick some real events and then we can help you elaborate on them. Besides it's an easy topic.

[Kurosaki Ishimaru]

I'm sorry, I thought it would be a good idea because my class is all about story and understanding story structures and stuff. I guess it's my fault for not explaining everything right in the first place. It's mendatory to use some sort of stories in our essays including the ones we have read this year in the class. And like I said, I thought it would be a good idea to use anime since that would make a unique essay and since I'm anime fan, well, if you guys still disagree with me explaining what the essay is really about. Lemme know and I'm sorry that I let you guys confuse and made you all pissed at me. Anyways, I'll take your words as an advice and rewrite my essay over again.

[dyne]

write about hitler it should be easy there is a load to say about him and the nazi's

[Panther]

What you should do is research on the subject. You obviously have no information pertaining to the topic you wish to write. Even if it is a story-based character you should at least use a far better basis.

A good thing is to read up on books that pertain to such characters and journeys. I point you to a good book by Ursula K. Le Guin, her award-winning novel called The Left Hand of Darkness. Based on science fiction actually, it tells the story of the experiences of this guy called Genly Ai, and I am damn sure you can use the whole story as your example.

Quite seriously, if you read any books like that before, you can also use them as background basis (be sure to give credit when due, plagiarism is a F for your essay).

If you still want more specific help from me PM me and I will get around to you when I can.

[Kurosaki Ishimaru]

thanks, I think I should use all the books I have read so far instead of including anime it seems like my idea was like the worst idea ever!!! But the truth is my classmates who evaluated my rough draft really enjoyed it^^ but I guess I have to go revise it...TT^TT I'll post later on when I need more help, sorry that I bothered you all with such a childish stupid question...*bumps head on the table for apologies**didn't know the table was too close...X.X*

[Ash]

You should have told us it was suppose to include books you've read in class and stories in the first place.

[dyne]

thats when you make shit up they cant know what you've read

[Kurosaki Ishimaru]

yeah... English papers are always like that... that's why I hate essays, because I never finish those books, and sometimes don't understand what's the point that the author is trying to make@.@ so confusing...