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goddessproject
04-24-2008, 03:55 PM
Grabbed a piece of panel from one of the recent bleach chapters and colored it. im not a color expert, its actually the first one and i didn't worry too much about the cuts of the render because i just couldnt be arsed. i just wanted a unique focal.

http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/165/yorubteo6.png

This is how the sig turned out. While I'm not completely displeased with it theres something wrong with it and I've looked at it for so long now I can't see it. CnC is fine.
http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/8229/btgiftsigwh1.png

GregHouse
04-24-2008, 03:59 PM
Hair color seems way too vibrant. It's more of a deep purple, even black in some cases.

goddessproject
04-24-2008, 04:01 PM
yeah you're right. it is. i didnt notice it before, but i didnt use a reference point for the color either. i could probably fix that

K12
04-24-2008, 04:53 PM
I dont think the stock matches the background. Besides that, nicly done.

Knight
04-24-2008, 07:02 PM
I love the style and flow in that signiture

Hariberu
04-25-2008, 12:48 AM
Hmm the only thing I don't like is the border and the fact that it seems a bit busy. Although I'm also curious to see what this would look like in b&w but with the text the same, I think it would be win imo.

Knight
04-25-2008, 07:31 PM
Come to think ov it I don't really get the backround

Estelle
04-25-2008, 08:04 PM
Not bad at all for your first time coloring! I agree with the hair color though, and maybe lightening the skin a little to make her golden eyes stand out a bit more.

I like the text on your sig and the fx around the focal but the bg makes it a little too busy imo. Maybe try it in B&W like Hariberu suggested. :amused: