My Very First AMV

[Queen Neliel]

I'm pretty sure you've seen all the n00b threads before, but I beg that you take a few minutes out of your precious time to look over my humble piece.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jMCBYvOT6zg

Please be kind; this is my first try. I apologize for the subtitles in advance, and I did use Windows Movie Maker. (Watch it in high quality, if you would.)

The song is "Drove Through Ghosts To Get Here" by 65daysofstatic.

[Wras]

Holy crap that was great. Liked the IchiHime (if that was part of the vid >.>), loved the song and I liked how you put it together; I love 65DOS. The vid made me feel like there's a big dramatic part 2 coming as well. 5/5.

The only complaint is subtitles, but only for the parts where you used the opening, not necessarily where you had it during the fight. You can download JUST the opening from some site, not sure which, and I know how tricky it is to get raws so I won't deduct from that.

Keep making them; good job once again.

[Queen Neliel]

^ Yes, the IchiHime-ness was a large part of the video, but not the entire thing. (I thought the song was quite clever, as Ichigo almost literally "drove through ghosts to get [there]"). ^_^ Thank you for your support and criticism.

[Bleachthing]

I left a comment on the video. Check it out.

[14M85H4NKZ]

Seems good to me, got a laugh from the order of some of the subtitles (probably not intended).

Lines I found funny
Grimmjow: If that were true why didnt you grab the bitch and run for it the moment you saw her, Then Inoue says: Whenever he says something like that he says it like hes swearing an oath, Made it look like she was talking about what Grimm said :)

[lurch]

you tried t set a slow to fast tone and work your way up but it should have move from 1:30 to 45 sec to build up the speed . if you want ichi hime then do more somber or proud music the beat would have been better for the fight

or the solid focus on the on coming fight slow to fast.
thats just IMO dont take it harsh.