Gods Path

I follow the path less taken. The path is filled with broken glass. Though my feet are stained with blood, I walk to lose my past. There is a shadow that walks beside me, he is showing me the way. I do as I am told, though I cannot see his face. His voice is that of reasoning, I know im not insane.the words he speaks, they give me hope, that there will be better days. Dare I say ive sinned, and i have made mistakes. But with his help and guidance, Ill reach the end someday. Until that time I will go on until I right the wrongs. The path I walk is long and hard but I am not alone...And niether are you...

Always a work in progress, but hopefully this is better than the last. Any critque accepted as it helps me grow. I know its amature(?) but I took out the / and hopefully this is what you guys wanted me to do. I know its not poe or anything, but progress come in little steps. Please, any feedback is appreciated as I do take them to heart and try to learn from the criticisim. :D And dont worry about my feeling, just be blunt with me. :)