"do u love me?"
Posted 11-10-2011 at 09:09 AM by b1uttercup
He made her jealous ...
On purpose he tried.
When the girl asked "do u love me?"
On purpose he lied...
He played with jealousy like it was a game.
Little did he know...
things wouldnt be the same.
His plan was working but he had no clue.
How wrong things would go...the damage he would do.
One night she broke down..feeling all alone.
Just her and the blade...
no one else home.
She dialed his phone number..he answered "hello?"
She told him she loved him..then hung up the phone.
He raced to her house...just a minute to late
He found her lying in blood..
her heart had no rate
Beside her was a note,
in it her confession...
Her love for this man...
her only obssesion.
As he read the note, he knelt down n cried...
He grabbed her knife..
That night they both died...
She was found in his arms...
both of them dead.
Under her note, his hand writing said
" I love her so, she never knew....all this time i loved her too"
On purpose he tried.
When the girl asked "do u love me?"
On purpose he lied...
He played with jealousy like it was a game.
Little did he know...
things wouldnt be the same.
His plan was working but he had no clue.
How wrong things would go...the damage he would do.
One night she broke down..feeling all alone.
Just her and the blade...
no one else home.
She dialed his phone number..he answered "hello?"
She told him she loved him..then hung up the phone.
He raced to her house...just a minute to late
He found her lying in blood..
her heart had no rate
Beside her was a note,
in it her confession...
Her love for this man...
her only obssesion.
As he read the note, he knelt down n cried...
He grabbed her knife..
That night they both died...
She was found in his arms...
both of them dead.
Under her note, his hand writing said
" I love her so, she never knew....all this time i loved her too"
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Posted 11-10-2011 at 04:51 PM by d2sharp
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idk why but it had a "the night before christmas" vide to it, if this is your work well done....
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Posted 11-12-2011 at 05:27 PM by LadyMeyesi
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  you made me cry it is so great that you can write such well done  |
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Posted 01-07-2012 at 01:14 AM by aono
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