Kaguro didn't make it to the Hall of Fame, so I'm redoing it. Check out the far more gruesome Kaguro in the guild. Kinda gives you chills as you picture it, doesn't it?

Thanks for the rep, kisuke. In case you were wondering where the inspiration I got came from, much of it came from Devil May Cry 4, but there were other sources. Some of it was even from anime fan art i found. But I really hope that Kaguro will earn a place in the Hall of Fame.

I'll remove the Absolute moves and replace them with one I came up with today:

(Shikai) Bloody Raven - By channeling reiatsu into the blade, the black aura expands until it resembles a lance, enhancing the sword's physical power and allowing it to burn through flesh. This technique is only active for 10 minutes and has no effect on the other abilities.

(Bankai) Bloody Phoenix - By channeling reiatsu into the blade, the runic charges glow brighter and a bluish-black flame engulfs the blade. Along with the benefits of Bloody Raven, this technique grants access to more powerful techniques. Like Bloody Raven, this technique can only be active for 10 minutes at a time.

What are these new, more powerful moves? You'll have to wait and see sometime later in the week. Two new moves plus a revised Dying Sun.

your off to a great start in that regard,sorry i keep forgetting u dont have a laptop

I can't upload any pics cuz I'm still using a PS3.

Also, I'll have to redo the zan to make it just right so that OG has a positive review on everything. I want to make a zan whose epicness you can picture as you read it.

Looks like you got a good crit
have you thought of adding pics?

Ok. I'm kinda excited cuz I put a lot of thought into each bit. Some video games like Darksiders and Final Fantasy were a great source of inspiration.
I hope OG approves it on the first overview.

From what ive seen the guild recognizes everyone,OG said hes posting crits tonight so you'll prolly get 1 too

So, you think it'll be officially recognized? I went back and did some grammar editing, but its still the same.

Yeah. I got a bit of inspiration from a shitload of resources. I was going for "majestic spirit with a hellish power." From your perspective, I did an awesome job.