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#4951 03-09-2011, 12:06 AM
Hisagi_Chan I'm a rocker and a roller too! Gotei 13 Shinigami Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Some place with loads of hills. Age: 26 Posts: 872 Gender:	@Seraph - That's what i get for not using my Japanese in oooooo ages lol. Thanks man, looks like i need to bone up but i am still learning. __________________ Spoiler: Jakarru Kami no kashira (Head of the Jackal God) Spoiler: Sealed state: Spoiler: Jakarru Kami no Kashira is a 33" long Katana with a 28" blade and 5" hilt. The blade is black and curved more than usual, causing it to resemble a large sickle or hook on a shepherds crook. The Guard is a vibrant gold coloured octagon with Ankh's etched in to both sides at half centimetre intervals. The hilt of the katana is black to match the blade but wrapped neatly in a white, bandage like, material and topped in a gold coloured pommel cover.On the butt of the pommel cover is a small carving of a Jackals head. Inner World: Spoiler: The inner world is a desolate landscape of what seems to be white sand and rock. On closer inspection however the sand is revealed to be natron, a salt-like substance used to preserve mummies, and the rocks are the lower half of unused Canopic Jars made of calcite. A vicious wind blows through the landscape at all times, constantly changing the terrain and weighing the visitor down with a sense of dread caused by the thought that they may not escape. There is only one way in and out of this world and that is a black door, edged in a gold light, that is constantly changing position. Jakarru Kami no Kashira refers to the door as "The Souls Entrance" and only he is able to lead you to the door and to freedom. Spirit: Spoiler: The spirit of Jakarru Kami no Kashira is a small black jackal with a bandage around the neck, tied in to a bow. He is extremely silent and only speaks when he feels it is necessary for him to do so. His stare is somewhat unnerving, as if he is constantly weighing you up and deciding where to place you on his list. In stark contrast to his surroundings he is active all day, though more so at dawn and dusk, constantly gathering Natron and weighing it on his front paws. His calm demeanour and wise words earn him great respect and he will return that respect if he deems you worthy enough. The greatest form of respect he shows is allowing you to leave the inner world by guiding you to the door. Shikai Release Command: Anatatachi wa hakaru, Jakarru Kami no Kashira (Weigh them, Head of the Jackal God.) Appearance: Spoiler: Jakarru Kami no Kashira changes in to a spiked black wooden flail. It is made from two pieces of wood that are attached by a white 3" chain, like an overly large nunchuk, and are extremely durable. The handle (For lack of a better word) is 1.5m long and 1.5" in diameter. The spiked piece of wood is 1m long and 1.5" in diameter. It is covered in gold coloured metal spikes that are spaced half an inch either side and run down to the end of the wood. The tip of the spiked piece is curved upwards slightly to form a crude tearing or grappling hook. Abilities: Spoiler: In Shikai, Jakarru Kami no Kashira gains the ability to increase or decrease the power of its attacks by altering the weight of the spiked pole on the flail. The heavier the spiked pole becomes, the more damage is caused but it becomes harder to wield. The maximum the wielder can carry effectively is 135lbs (roughly 61kg) though it can go higher. The only time the maximum weight would be used is if the opponent was significantly larger than the wielder. Zenrei no Kachi (Worth of one's whole soul) This ability allows Jakarru Kami no Kashira to peer in to the opponents soul and weigh it against the feather of truth. If the soul is lighter than the feather by a great deal then any damage caused by Jakarru Kami no Kashira will be miniscule, even if the wound would normally kill. The heavier the soul the greater the damage and if the soul is heavier than the feather by a great margin even the smallest cut can be turned in to a life threatening injury. When this ability is used the wielder can see the soul being weighed by Jakkaru Kami no Kashira as a ghostly image in front of the opponent and can be seen by both opponent and wielder. It depicts Jakarru Kami no Kashira with a set of scales placed in front of him. On the right hand scale is the feather of truth and on the left hand scale is a blue light in the shape of a heart, representing the opponents soul. Once the soul is measured Jakarru Kami no Kashira returns to the inner world with the scales and feather of truth. In shikai the complete form of the opponent is needed to be seen, even if only for a second, in order for the soul to be weighed. Bankai: Jakarru Kami no Genri (Fundamental truth of the Jackal God) Activation: Spoiler: The wielder holds the flail horizontally across the chest and calls Bankai. There is then a flash of gold light and the Bankai is revealed. Appearance: Spoiler: The flail becomes a two headed axe on a gold coloured shaft, approx. 1.8m in length and 1.5" in diameter. The axes are positioned on each end, like the heads of a shovel, and crescent shaped. They're both a gold colour to match the shaft and engraved with a black Jackal head on each flat side. Approx. 14" in diametre they are razor sharp and extremely light, allowing for a faster swing or slash. The wielders head becomes encased in a black metal mask in the shape of a Jackal head. They are covered from the base of the neck, all the way to the top of the head and ears and a snout protrude several inches in their correct places. The mask itself is covered in a fine gold filligree of swirls and ankhs whilst the eye sockets seem to glow a blazing white. Although appearing to be heavy it allows for fluent movement and all around vision, leaving no blind spots except natural ones. Spoiler: The wielders clothing changes to a metallic gold skirt and halter top that exposes the midriff. The skirt itself is calf length and splits up the front to allow movement, with a simple black cloth hanging to keep everything covered. On the top of the skirt is a chain belt with charms made up of ankhs that matches an anklet on the wielders right ankle. The top is tied at the neck and back tightly to keep it secure and moveable and the wielder is left barefoot. On the wielders upper left arm is a simple gold armlet in the shape of a jackal. Spoiler: Abilities: Spoiler: The wielder gains a significant speed and strength boost, allowing them to move with the speed and agility of a Jackal and lift twice as much as before. The legs of the user are also inbued with strength allowing for kicks powerful enough to break rock and the ability to jump to extreme heights. (In testing the highest the user has ever jumped is just over 9m.) The abilities from Shikai are also boosted, raising the weight limit of the weapon to 270lbs (122kg) and allowing both ends of the axe to change weight. Zenrei no Kachi now needs only a split second glimps of any part of the opponents body in order to weigh the soul and the users reiatsu rises by approx. 70%. Hantei no Omori (Weight of Judgement) Spoiler: This ability brings forth the sense of dread that is present in the inner world of Jakarru Kami no Kashira. It presses down on the opponent and makes them nervous and jittery, instilling a sense of paranoia that can potentially disable the opponent. In the most extreme cases it can cause a state of live mummification, dry-freezing the opponent on the spot completely. Fighting Style: Spoiler: During the sealed state of Jakkaru Kami no Kashira the wielder uses a form of Ninjutsu that focuses on the use of Kama and Kusarigama. The aim is to trap and block the opponents weapons, disarming them or disabling them as quickly as possible. The sickled shape of the blade is perfect for this style and often catches opponents off guard as they expect the vicious looking blade to slash and rip. However due to the curve of the blade it is very difficult to slash and easier to trap weapons and limbs whilst still causing damage. Decapitation however is quite suited to the blade. During Shikai the user switches to a mix of Bojutsu, the Okinawan style centred on the use of a six foot staff, and Tahtib, an Ancient Egyptian style that is focused on head shots and distraction, often being flamboyant and graceful. The spiked flail that completes the staff is the perfect distraction method, the opponent often too busy focusing on what they consider to be the dangerous end and forgetting about the range of the handle itself. This allows the wielder to fully utilise both parts of the weapon for both attack and defense. During Bankai the user once again switches styles. Whilst keeping the use of Tahtib they forgo the Okinawan Bojutsu and replace it with the Northern Chinese Staff. This allows the user to focus more on cutting and swinging, whilst at the same time defending and aiming for the vital areas such as the head, rib cage, stomach and back in order to cause the most damage. The users increased speed, strength and agility also helps with this style as they can still attack from unusual positions, never wasting a movement, being quick on defense and increasing the power of their strikes. During all three states the user rarely uses Kido and if it is used it is more of a distraction method or lure in order to set a trap. Any hand to hand that is used is centred on the Wushu style, using the wielders flexibility and initiative to the greatest advantage they can. FC's Spoiler: Owner of Spoiler: Co-Owner of Spoiler: FC'S Spoiler:

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03-09-2011, 04:38 AM

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Originally Posted by OminousG

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Liberty, you stated some wording about the gauntlets being rooted into the wielder. Previously the whole zan merge thing was taboo and few if any pulled it off appropriately... (by our standards anyways...) But seeing how Kubo treated Ichigo's "Final Getsuga", he's given us more to ponder on.

their r not connected to the user, the gauntlets are connected to each other by roots that go across the users back

being a single zan i believe that they needed to be connected somehow.

i will change the wording to make this clearer

Tsubushikaze no Kuma- Crushing Wind Bear [WIP]

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Type:combat
Element:air/wood
Focus:power

Spirit World:

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Spirit

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sealed form:

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Shikai:

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Bankai:

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Form:

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Abilities:

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[COLOR="RoyalBlue"]Zan's[/COLOR][SP]
[B][I][U][FONT="Century Gothic"][COLOR="Lime"]HoF Zan'z[/COLOR][/FONT][/U][/I][/B]

Name:[COLOR="RoyalBlue"]Kantsuu Washi[/COLOR] - [COLOR="Red"]piercing eagle[/COLOR]

[SP]
Type: combat/melee
Element: None
Focus: Speed/attack

Inner world:
[SP]
[IMG]http://www.filemagazine.com/thecollection/archives/images/DESERT-TREE.jpg[/IMG]
a wide desert containing a single dried up tree frequently ravaged by bone cutting winds that lift the sands, dilapidating any unprotected living thing.
Kantsuu seems to always stare at the single tree. If I could guess I would say he is wondering how it still stands.
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[COLOR="DeepSkyBlue"]Kantsuu Washi[/COLOR] true form:
[SP]
[IMG]http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/5566/cloakedman.jpg[/IMG]
An old yet agile wingless humanoid eagle with big and powerful talons wearing a full body black cloak in which only a portion of his beak is visible.
He has a very hoarse voice that invokes feelings of mixed admiration and fear.
Although a rare sight, his talons might be seen when hes talking (while performing some hand gesture), always with a sinister green glow around it.

In order to learn his name, his user must first learn his ways of battle. Only when one learns, feels, and lives by the words "a good defense is a strong offense", is when [COLOR="RoyalBlue"]Kantsuu washi[/COLOR] will deem the wielder worthy of knowing his name.

He seems to have a cold and relaxed straightforward personality as he has never shown emotions (I seriously cant tell what he feel unless he tells me, which he does a lot for some reason).

Kantsuu Washi always walks around when he talks. He seems to prefer and be more comfortable talking behind me. He occasionally asks me not to turn around,which sometimes makes one weary due to the way he talks. As a pay back, I made up a nickname to annoy him, 'Kant'. He hates it (maybe cause it sounds like cat:amused:).
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unreleased:
[SP]
Sealed form:
[SP]A 2 feet double edged short sword, with a black blade, black guard and a black hilt with some dark-yellow details.
[IMG]http://t2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ERteac4PrtUuqM:http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/2250/katanagreatsword2tq.jpg&t=1[/IMG]
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Fighting style:
[SP]
Close range fast movement style, where the user holds the sword with a reverse grip.
Attack:
Using kempo with a mix of brawling, the user closes on the target with fast movements and applies a series of slashes, punches, kicks and throws, to disable the target, and finishing with a deep stab on a vital point.

Defense/counterattack:
Uses the sword to block/parry attacks(using only the right hand) keeping a safe distance, while a Bakudō/Hadō is prepared (and used) with the left hand.
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Shikai:
[SP]
release command: [COLOR="RoyalBlue"]Tsukkome[/COLOR]-[COLOR="Red"]thrust deep[/COLOR]
Shikai form:
[SP]
[IMG]http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/8046/kantsushikai.jpg[/IMG]
Two large katars, connected by a black chain.
Great for piercing attacks.
Both katars have a 1.5 feet black blade, with a dark-grey and black guard.
Have various eagle like details, being the most prominent, on the arm guard.
Although heavy looking, it is very light allowing for fast movements, while providing a good defense.
The blade is coated by a thin layer of reiatsu, causing a green aura around it.
The aura can extend up to 2 inches from the blade.
This layer is actually and extension of the blade, slightly increasing the range of the katar. So even if no physical contact is made, if it came close enough there can still be some damage done (0 to 2 inches depending on user reiatsu reserves).
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Fighting style:
[SP]
Close to mid range using the katar.
kempo styled moves
Attack:
Again like the sealed form, kempo with a mix of brawling is used
but because of shikai length and positioning, it is mainly used for mid to ranged attacks.
Using the one of the shikai to parry the weapon of the target, the legs are used to hinder the target, finishing the target with a deep stab on a vital point.
In case thats not possible, the abilities of the shikai are used to hinder the target for a new attempt.

Defense/counterattack:
Both katars used for parrying, using abilities to push the target away when possible.
Legs are again used to hinder the target.

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abilities:
[SP]
1-Passive-[COLOR="RoyalBlue"]Surudoi kansatsu me[/COLOR]-[COLOR="red"]Eagle Eye[/COLOR]:-the wielder is capable of seeing at long distances, with the out most detail. While at close range he can see the details of even the most fast movements.

2-[COLOR="RoyalBlue"]Kantsuu Tsubasa[/COLOR]-[COLOR="red"]piercing wing[/COLOR]:-a wide swing followed by a stab motion that causes a wide eagle shaped reiatsu projectile to be launched at high speed to hit the target(mid range [50 meters]).

3-[COLOR="RoyalBlue"]Kantsuu Kuchibashi[/COLOR]-[COLOR="red"]piercing Beak[/COLOR]:-fast stabing thrusts with the shikai create small eagle shaped, very high speed, reiatsu projectiles in high numbers that pierce the target(close to mid range [10 meters]).
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Bankai
[SP]
bankai first form:
[SP]
Name:[COLOR="RoyalBlue"]Shinkirite Kantsuu Washi[/COLOR]:-:[COLOR="Red"]deep cutter piercing eagle[/COLOR]
[SP]
[IMG]http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/2162/twinbankai.jpg[/IMG]

the bankai consists on a black leather armor for the arms and torso, with a black steel gaunlet and black steel plates from shoulder to elbow, and a dark grey chest plate.
It is made from the same metal as the shikai so it is light weighted despite its size.
The gaunlets are capable of creating a 2 feet spirit particle green blade (spirit particles bounded by reiatsu that creates an aura, the same as the one on the shikai blade) from a front faced spike.
the excess reiatsu used for the blade creates a green mist that slowly flows close to the armor.
The armor passively absorbs that excess reiatsu minimizing loses (check abilities for details).

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Details:
[SP]Although this bankai focuses killing the target fast, it is capable of passively reusing most of the reiatsu used to create swords, making Kantsuu Washi user very capable of fighting for a very long amounts of time (with minimum loses of reiatsu) when using proper fighting techniques (check abilities for details).
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Abilities:
[SP]The bankai adds one passive (while on 1st form) and 1 new ability, on top of the 3 abilities from shikai.
1:-[COLOR="RoyalBlue"]Sasurai Washi[/COLOR]-[COLOR="red"]Wandering Eagle[/COLOR]:- user can create a sword (like the one in his arm), at anytime in a 3 feet(~=1m) radius of his body.
Cause this sword doesn't have a steady source of reiatsu (like the one on the armor) it only lasts 10 seconds, and then dissipates.
This swords can be re-absorved by the armor to prevent reiatsu loss.
The amount that can be created depends only on the user reiatsu reserves and [COLOR="RoyalBlue"]Shibutoi[/COLOR].

2-Passive:-[COLOR="RoyalBlue"]Shibutoi Tsubasa[/COLOR]-[COLOR="Red"]Enduring Wing[/COLOR]:-the armor of the bankai is capable of storing the reiatsu excess from the sword it creates (the swords from [COLOR="royalblue)"]Sasurai Washi[/COLOR] can turn to mist by touching them with the armor, allowing them to be absorbed), using that reiatsu to create new swords, reducing the amount of reiatsu the user needs to use(can store enough for up to 5 new swords worth of reiatsu). The mist of the blades reiatsu is passively drawn into the armor, while some reiatsu from other sources can still be absorbed (in small quantities) by contact.

3:-[COLOR="RoyalBlue"]Kantsuu Tsubasa[/COLOR]-[COLOR="red"]piercing wing[/COLOR]:-when Kantsuu wielder uses this ability while in bankai, the sword in his gaunlet is launched, as the beak of the eagle shaped projectile (the sword dissipates after 10 seconds or after traveling 100 meters).

4:-[COLOR="RoyalBlue"]Kantsuu Tsume[/COLOR]-[COLOR="red"]piercing talons[/COLOR]:-while using this ability, shards of the sword are launched, as the beak of the small eagle shaped projectiles (the shards dissipate after 5 seconds or after traveling 50 meters).
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Fighting style:
[SP]
fast, at very close range, attacks
using high speed to close in to target
kempo styled moves
Attack:
[SP]
User focuses on stabbing/slashing with the bankai blade, while using Kido to hinder, bind or attack the target.
Also while sparing with a foe, a [COLOR="RoyalBlue"]Sasurai[/COLOR] can be created anywhere within the 3 feet area, parrying melee attacks and creating openings for a direct attack.
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Defense/counterattack:
[SP]same has shikai, although kido can also be used by releasing or absorbing one of the gaunlet blades.
[COLOR="RoyalBlue"]Sasurai[/COLOR] can be created to parry blows
Also, in extreme cases, created [COLOR="RoyalBlue"]Sasurai[/COLOR] can be used to create a shield to block powerful long range attacks.
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Final Form:
[SP]
Name:[COLOR="RoyalBlue"]Shinkirite Kantsuuwashi Kiri[/COLOR]-[COLOR="Red"]Deep Cutter Piercing Eagle Mist[/COLOR]
[SP][IMG]http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/6776/finalform.jpg[/IMG]
bankai steel armor breaks apart (leather armor stays).
This parts create two 5 feet long blades that hover near the shoulders, three 3,5 feet blades that hover behind the user, and four 2 feet long blades that hover in front of the user.
These blades move accordingly to the users will.[/SP]

Details:
[SP]The armor can't absorb the amount of reiatsu fast enough, and has such with the reiatsu consumption from all 9 blades,the time this form can be maintained depends on user's reiatsu reserves.

The excess reiatsu from the blades now flow freely creating a green mist around the user.
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Abilities:
[SP]Same abilities as shikai and 1st form bankai, with the exception of the bankai passive.
The power of the abilities depend on the size of the blade that used them.
All blades can use a different ability at the same time.
Although the user can use the 1st form abilities, each ability consumes 1 blade, and as such a new one must be created, thus reducing this form time limit.
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Fighting Style:
[SP]fast, at very close range, attacks
using high speed to close in to target
Armor plates move fast and freely within the same area has Sasurai Washi, giving the chance for the user to use hand to hand combat techniques or kidō.
Kempo styled moves.
Attack:
[SP]kempo mixed with brawling is used like before.
shoulder blades are used to block incoming attacks.
back blades are used for piercing attacks, and front blades for slashing.
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Defense:
[SP]all blades used for block. Bakudō/Hadō is used to disrupt foes assault.
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[COLOR="Red"]My 4th Division Zan[/COLOR]

[COLOR="Green"]Dākuraitohotaru[/COLOR]- dark light firefly
[SP]Type: support/ranged
Element: light and shadow
Focus: binding and defense

Spirit World:
[SP][IMG]http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/6154/bbbmy.jpg[/IMG]
simple plain with a big branched tree in the middle
its always dark, with light coming from only one source, balls of light by the thousands giving the effect of a place filled with fireflies[/SP]

Spirit:
[SP][IMG]http://img826.imageshack.us/img826/4290/spirit2z.jpg[/IMG]
frail pale looking humanoid spirit dressed with a silky like white clothing.
Speaks in a tender way, always surrounded by balls and strings of light
carries a cross shaped wand wrapped in bandages made from the same material of her clothing.
looks blind at first but is capable of seeing the slightest movement in such a dark world. Her shy personality makes it hard to know her, since she tends to talk from behind a tree witch makes her hard to understand. Sometimes forces me out of the spirit world, although very rare occurrence, with such fury that makes me think theres another side to that shy tender personality of her (seriously i was caught completely off guard the 1st time it happened, she scared the hell out of me:push:).
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(thinking on using this pic instead what do u think?)
[SP][IMG]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/1690/spirit22.jpg[/IMG][/SP]
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sealed:
[SP][SP][IMG]http://www.swordsofmight.com/ProductImages/samuraiswords/valiantarmoury/Valiant_Armoury_Nagai_Handoru_Nodachi.jpg[/IMG][/SP]
a 3.5 feet nodachi with a 1 foot tsuka(=_=... big picture srry about that)
has the user dislikes to inflict pain he uses Jigen-ryū style dragonfly stance to ensure a quick kill.

(check [URL="http://manga.bleachexile.com/xblade-chapter-7-page-31.html"]here[/URL] for visual help on dragonfly stance)
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shikai:
[SP]release command:[COLOR="red"]Kurai michi o terasu[/COLOR]-light the dark ways
the shikai form:
[SP][IMG]http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/1407/shikaifirefly.jpg[/IMG]
a way beyond average size (3 feet blade, 4 feet total length, 0.6 feet width) runed gladious surrounded by crystal prisms and the gaunlet that holds it.
the shikai primary tactics are bind and supress focusing and preventing the target from fighting rather and killing him.
using the prismatic crystals that float around the sword, reiatsu is amplified and shaped in the wanted form.
this same crystals retain some of the reiatsu using it to further amplify the following attacks, thus incrising their effectiveness over long battles, but reducing their strenght early on (goes from 80% to 150%).
on night battles this crystals shine brightly while they keep a continuous flow of reiatsu around themselves.[/SP]

abilities:
[SP]
Passive:[COLOR="Lime"]Mure[/COLOR]-The swarm[SP]every attack from the sword or abilities releases small particles of light that attach themselves to the target, these particles slowly stretch to other particles to create a web like string on the target, binding him in the process.
Although the strings can be easily removed early on, the amount of particles creating these strings is so high that the target would have to concentrate all his effort on removing them all.
further more, [COLOR="Lime"]Mure[/COLOR] can easily be sensed by the user making it impossible for a foe with [COLOR="Lime"]Mure[/COLOR] attached to hide.[/SP]
1-[COLOR="Magenta"]Hotaru keimusho[/COLOR]-firefly prison [SP]sends out a ring shaped reiatsu projectile that binds and absorbs some of the target reiatsu to maintain its strength.
When removed it leaves [COLOR="Lime"]Mure[/COLOR] on the target.
Creates strings from it self to [COLOR="Lime"]Mure[/COLOR] particles already on the target increasing its size.
has prisms charge up this ring becomes stronger.[/SP]
2-[COLOR="Magenta"]Hotaru tenmetsu[/COLOR]-firefly flash [SP]sends out a ball shaped reiatsu projectile that creates a strong flash when it explodes.
The explosion releases [COLOR="Lime"]Mure[/COLOR].
Has the prisms charge up, the flash becomes brighter and more [COLOR="Lime"]Mure[/COLOR] is released.[/SP]
3-[COLOR="Magenta"]Hotaru sheru[/COLOR]-Firefly shell [SP]sends out a small sphere shaped reiatsu projectile that expands to create a shield around the target (can be used on self).
on expansion its realeases [COLOR="Lime"]Mure[/COLOR] onto nearby targets.
has prisms charge up this shield becomes stronger[/SP][/SP]

combat style:
[SP]the shikai is based only for support and has no damaging ablities, by binding/disabling the target temporarly and protecting allies, the shikai provides well need help for large scale battles.
for 1 on 1 battles, after perfectly binding the target, Jigen-ryū style is used to strike it down.
Dragonfly stance is once again used, as the stronger the impact the more Mure is released.[/SP]
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bankai:
[SP]
Name:[COLOR="Red"]Akarui shiro[/COLOR]-bright white

bankai form:
[SP][IMG]http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/3230/bankaifirefly.jpg[/IMG]
a runed spear surrounded by crytals prisms and the gaunlet that hold it.
bankai gets all abilities shikai has, and further engages them by alowing the user to cast them at multiple targets, and so giving greater support to allied combatants.
in orther to keep up with the power increase, the amount of prisms is increased (increases power from X% to 250%, where X is the % it was at shikai).[/SP]

Abilities:
[SP]every ability get an extra effect besides power increase
Passive:[COLOR="Lime"]Mure[/COLOR]-the swarm-increased amount of [COLOR="Lime"]Mure[/COLOR] is released.
In addiction Mure absorbs small amounts of reiatsu from target to increase spreading speed.
1-[COLOR="Magenta"]Hotaru keimusho[/COLOR]-firefly prison- the ring vibrates continuously releasing [COLOR="Lime"]Mure[/COLOR]
2-[COLOR="rgb(255, 0, 255)"]Hotaru tenmetsu[/COLOR]-firefly flash- each Hotaru tenmetsu explodes 3 times
3-[COLOR="rgb(255, 0, 255)"]Hotaru sheru[/COLOR]-Firefly shell- the shield vibrates releasing [COLOR="Lime"]Mure[/COLOR]. it also releases a special [COLOR="Lime"]Mure[/COLOR] inside that closes up bleeding wounds.
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combat style:
[SP]same has shikai, this time focusing more on offence using Sōjutsu[/SP]

final technique:
[SP][COLOR="Red"]Hotaru Rekuiemu[/COLOR]-all crystals break into pieces and spread across the battle field absorving all other light from any source(the only light that can be seen is the faint light coming from the crystal pieces and [COLOR="Lime"]Mure[/COLOR] giving the sensation of a firefly field) making it impossible to see anything with the naked eye, while at the same time each piece releases [COLOR="Lime"]Mure[/COLOR] in heavy quantities.
this pieces attach themselves to anynumber of targets iluminating them while allies remain unseen.
5 seconds after the begging of the technique total darkness is achived, then after choosing the main target the attack is iniciated.
in 0.5 seconds, strings of reiatsu are sent from each unattached piece of the crystals into a newly formed ball of light in from of the user.
the attached ones connect directly with each other with reiatsu strings (these strings are up to 10 times more powerful than [COLOR="Lime"]Mure[/COLOR] binds, depending on number of targets), and together with Mure completely bind the target.
after those 0.5 seconds a 8 feet width beam of a bright white reiatsu is fired, spending all the prisms reiatsu.
the power of the beams depend on the power of the prisms(so the power ranges from 80% to 250%, where 100% equals the power of a cero)
while still firing the beam, the user concentrates all his remaining reiatsu on the tip of the spear, and throws it so that the moment the beam ends the spear has already hit the target.
after this, bankai can no longer be mantained as the user has used up all his reiatsu on the attack.[/SP][/SP]
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[COLOR="Red"]Zan's to come[/COLOR]

[COLOR="Blue"]Tsubushikaze no Kuma[/COLOR]- Crushing Wind Bear [WIP]
[SP]
Type:close combat
Element:air/wood
Focus:power

Spirit World:
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deep jungle with very tall trees
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Spirit
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An amazing 12 feet high (on all fours) bear with some branch like spikes coming out from allover his body.
Although very aggressive at first, kurasshā turned out to be a very understanding spirit, always worried about his wielder's safety, even in practice.
Because of his size and strength, he tends to somewhat break everything he touches. Thus he is very weary of having someone around, which is why he was so aggressive at first, as he was trying to keep anyone who entered his world at bay.
Although his size does reduce his agility, the trails created by kurasshā, indicate that he can travel at high speeds. Which was never seen, since he slows down when near someone.[/SP]

sealed form:
[sp]A 1.5 feet, black machete with a hilt covered by a black string.
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Shikai:
[sp]Release Command:[COLOR="Red"]Kyouhon Shiro[/COLOR] - [COLOR="Lime"]run wild[/COLOR]
Form:
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A 5 feet staff-sword, in which the blade has 2.5 feet.
If seen up close, one would be able to see that the shikai is basically made up of steel strong branches, all entwined to create the hilt, and that are also entwined around long machete like blade, being the only difference of this blade and a normal machete (besides being stuck to a branch), the fact that its longer, and has a split edge, although its only a few millimeters.[/sp]

Abilities:
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1. [COLOR="Red"]Tsubushiashi [/COLOR]- Crushing Paw
For the entire duration of the shikai, using the small spit as a boundary, a micro tornado is created on the back side of the blade. So the user can attack with normal slashing moves, using the longer edge, while the smaller edge concentrates the tornado, so when a foe is hit with that side of the bade, the strength of the tornado is released onto it, causing great blunt damage, and knocking the foe backwards.

2. [COLOR="Red"]Osaeashi[/COLOR] - Restraining Paw
The user stomps the ground with the end of the shikai's hilt, causing the branches on the hilt to gain roots, and a sphere of high speed wind form around the user, with a 10 meter radius.
The roots fill the ground with reiatsu, and lift pieces of it into the winds, causing such debris to fly within the sphere, hitting anything besides the wielder in the center.

The wielder can also stomp the foe directly if he is on the ground, causing the roots to trap him immediately, and leave the target wide open for [COLOR="Red"]Tsubushiashi[/COLOR]
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Bankai:
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Form:
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This bankai is two gauntlets, one on each arm, made from steel hard branches.[yeah what can I say, i like gauntlets ^^, i think my time in kick-boxing is to blame]

The right gauntlet focuses on pure brute strength, using its cheer size and weight to crush its target.
To aid the jabs, high pressure air is released from the back to increase the ramming speed.

The left gauntlet does not have the strength nor power of the right one, but it can create high speed winds, creating a small sized tornado around it.

Both gauntlets are connected to each other by roots that spread across the users back.
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Abilities:
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1. [COLOR="Red"]Tsubushiashi[/COLOR] - Crushing Paw
For the entire duration of the bankai, a micro tornado is created on the left gauntlet (slightly bigger than shinkai's), so if the user attacks with it, the strength of the tornado is released onto the target, causing great blunt damage, and knocking the foe backwards.
The tornado can also be used to parry incoming attacks.

2. [COLOR="Red"]Osaeashi[/COLOR] - Restraining Paw
The user stomps the ground with the right gauntlet, causing the branches from it to gain roots, and a sphere of high speed wind form around the user, with a 15 meter radius.
The roots fill the ground with reiatsu, and lift pieces of it into the winds, causing such debris to fly within the sphere, hitting anything besides the wielder in the center.

Once the user deems fit, the wall is quicky concentrated, on the left gauntlet of the bankai, and immediately released, creating a shockwave that lifts more pieces of the ground, and sends the high speed flying debri all around the user.

The wielder can also stomp or punch the foe directly, causing the roots to trap him immediately, and the shock wave to hit at point blank (no debri at this range, so the damage is sightly higher to that made by [COLOR="Red"]Tsubushiashi[/COLOR]).

3.[COLOR="Red"]Karitoriashi [/COLOR]- Reaping Paw
The user holds both gauntlets together, and forces the left gauntlet to create a tornado around the right one. This will greatly improve the ability of the right gauntlet to increase its speed with air, by increasing the pressured air output substantially.

The impulse strength is so great, that it pulls the user in the direction it is aimed, increasing the users speed on a nearly straight line, thus allowing him to quickly cover any distance to the target while preparing a devastating blow.

Unlike the left arm gauntlet's tornado, this one does not subside on contact, and the high speed winds cause the foe's skin it enter's in touches to stretch beyond its capacity, causing a substantial amount of cuts to be open on the point of contact.

Although this ability can be used at any time, the amount of reiatsu that it is needed to create a tornado large enough to form around the right gauntlet and strong enough to last without sustenance from the left arm gauntlet, is about the same amount needed to create 10 of the tornadoes on the left gauntlet.

Furthermore, the high wind power causes stress on the branches of the gauntlet, and sometime must be given for them to recover, before using the ability once again, to avoid weakening of the branches hardness.
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Last edited by LibertyGear; 03-09-2011 at 04:42 AM

#4953 03-09-2011, 06:04 AM
Crydel Noob Join Date: Feb 2011 Posts: 9 Gender:	Thanks for the crit Hisagi Chan, I'll make sure to fix some stuff. Some things though. The Aurora Borealis in the spirit world could be there because it is a spirit world, not reality. Also, I've gotten a few things about the blizzard and I just wanted to say that frequently is not the same thing as constantly. The thing that really got me, was the wolf pack thing. They are not a hive mind. Wolves communicate through small changes in the position of their ears or tail. It might appear that they communicate through a hive mind, but they do not. So, it is reasonable that the wolves in the pack are individuals. If it helps picture a spec ops team. They are all work very efficiently with each other, but they are their own person. Besides that, I'll make sure to fix the other stuff.

#4954

03-09-2011, 09:28 AM

Hisagi_Chan

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Originally Posted by Crydel

Thanks for the crit Hisagi Chan, I'll make sure to fix some stuff. Some things though. The Aurora Borealis in the spirit world could be there because it is a spirit world, not reality. Also, I've gotten a few things about the blizzard and I just wanted to say that frequently is not the same thing as constantly. The thing that really got me, was the wolf pack thing. They are not a hive mind. Wolves communicate through small changes in the position of their ears or tail. It might appear that they communicate through a hive mind, but they do not. So, it is reasonable that the wolves in the pack are individuals. If it helps picture a spec ops team. They are all work very efficiently with each other, but they are their own person. Besides that, I'll make sure to fix the other stuff.

I have songs from Grease stuck in my head because of your username.....but that's besides the point. Yeah okay on the Aurora Borealis but as for the wolf pack thing i think i'm going to research it. I could have understood wrong from what i've read and seen so it's best to double check.

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Jakarru Kami no kashira (Head of the Jackal God)

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Bankai: Jakarru Kami no Genri (Fundamental truth of the Jackal God)

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#4955 03-09-2011, 06:29 PM
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#4956 03-10-2011, 08:06 PM
zangetsu136 Nerd Fighter Hollow Bait Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: NDSU Age: 21 Posts: 26 Gender:	Alright, so I am forgetting about the crystal thing for now and just going with the wind thought. I'm not sure what I could do with my shikai though. Perhaps a rotating blade of some kind attached to a chain on the hilt... Any ideas?

#4957 03-11-2011, 04:50 AM
OminousG The Don Mega™ Counsel Members Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Villa del ±th Posts: 5,659 Gender: Blog Entries: 1	the shikai blade itself doesn't have to be an animate object unless that's what you're going for. you could still use the crystal theme if you wanted to, the only thing Hisa was pointing out was the need for cohesion. __________________ ± Jūichibantai Taichō OminousG ± Founder of The Master ZanSmith Clan & The Zanpakutō Guild Spoiler: My Zanpakutō: 端ささやき - Hana Sasayaki - Edge Whisper Zanpakutō fighting style: 忍術 - Ninjutsu Inner World: Spoiler: A perpetual full moon night with an under developed terrain; spotted with flowered trees and sparse shrubbery. There is a constant casual breeze felt at all times, always rising and falling. As if by mirage, a 7-story pagoda vaporizes into view at the will of my zanpakutō. It is his dojo. In this world undisturbed is no sound, save the wind and his whisperings. Sasayaki Enshi's TRUE FORM Spoiler: the book contains his secret art form and is written in his language. Before I learned his name, Hana Sasayaki rendered hallucinations of his realm and shadowed figure. At first terrified, I mistook his figure as Death himself seeking combat. To stand in his presence took my very breath and his gaze made movement arduous. While training, randomly he'd draw me into my inner world. At the point we parried in combat, my breath waned as his faint whispers fell upon my ears. This we did for a time until I strengthened and was able to make out his words... Hana Sasayaki. Communication in its early stages was only achieved with a careful ear. Hana Sasayaki finds the lack of light tranquil... nonetheless, incandescent shadow is his most comfortable environment. By moonlight, he reads and scribes his secret art form in a book engraved with his shuriken. Unreleased: Spoiler: 端ささやき六尺棒 & 車剣 - Hana Sasayaki Rokushakubō & Rokukurumaken (Edge Whisper Six Shaku Staff w/ Six Shuriken) Fighting style: 棒術 & 手裏剣術 - Bōjutsu & Shurikenjutsu (staff & throwing technique) length: 6 ft (1.82 m) thickness: 1.5 inches (3.81 cm) weight: 12.5 lbs Each metal link and shuriken is encased with black Sekkiseki stone, the purest & rarest of this stone ever to be found. Notice: It is the nature of black Sekkiseki stone to drain reiatsu. My spirit pressure is only concealed by this; as it was chiseled & reiatsu blasted by my own reiatsu during my reclusive training deep within the Sekkiseki mines as I called upon it for the first time). Still under investigation by The Shinigami Research Institute of Technology... it is yet to be determined if it is to be officially labeled as strength or kidō based. However, it is clear that Hana Sasayaki is one of the rarest of zanpakutō, and appears to be equally balanced by both power and ability. Unlike any other zanpakuto ever documented in record before, it is made entirely of tamahagane. Though the encasing in its rare stone provides some rigidity, the interlocking links allow for a generous amount of flexibility. Note: The shuriken bag is worn concealed within my belt. Shikai Form I Spoiler: Release command: 慈悲無し、妥協無し、端ささやき (Jihi nashi, dakyou nashi, Hana Sasayaki) (There is no mercy, There is no compromise, Edge Whisper) (Yes, at the base of the blade is: *端ささやき (Hana Sasayaki - Edge Whisper)* Fighting style: 体術, 手裏剣術 - Wushu Taijutsu & Shurikenjutsu (close quarter & throwing technique) In shikai's first form, opposite of tradition, Hana Sasayaki takes the form of a katana along with its 車剣 - Rokurumaken (round shuriken). Notwithstanding, it is worn in the traditional tachi of the ninjutsu, having its saya placed on my back, wrapped intricately into my Wushu Gi (custom sleeveless ninja uniform). My zanpakutō's substance is the absence of light and sound. This gives me a shadow step that could go almost undetected by captain level. Truly, in broad daylight, you may sense me, but you more than likely won't see me until its nigh too late. Notice: Hana Sasayaki's blade has taken on the color and reiatsu draining characteristics of the black Sekkiseki stone. Added bonus is the technique: 1.)*来る端のささやき (Kuru, hana no sasayaki - It comes, whisper of the edge...)* Which is largly due to my increased speed; this is actually zanjutsu crossbred with shunpo technique. Its speed is so absolute, that it is quite often unseen by slower opponents, and this renders the attack almost completely silent. To an opponent approaching my speed level, this would give my zanpakutō the ability to appear as 10 vaporous swords trailing in one swipe. (If my opponent is even fast enough to see that...) Its motivation is to eliminate the threat immediately; whether by maiming or fatality. Though the sound mimics the faintest whisper when swiped through the air, any interference in its path of motion from another reiatsu weapon causes a violet spark at the instant the weapons contact. Instantaneously, during this very brief moment, Hana Sasayaki samples reiatsu from the opponent's zanpakutō. While this is not draining to the opponent's zan, it allows me to quantify the battle. Only brief contact is advised. (When cut, the opponent finds Hana Sasayaki not only draws blood; but is also stifling, making it more and more difficult to breath.) Shikai Form II Spoiler: Release command: 無敵で静粛なる恐怖の影、端ささやき! (Muteki de seishuku naru kyoufu no kage, Hana Sasayaki) (Shadow of the invincible, silent fear, Edge Whisper) 段平 Danbira (Japanese broadsword) & 車剣 - Rokurumaken (round shuriken) 24" black Sekkiseki blade 4" wide at largest point Futasujibi (dual ridged shinogi) 12" black Sekkiseki tsuka Fighting style: 体術, 手裏剣術 - Wushu Taijutsu & Shurikenjutsu My close quarter combat "Wushu Taijutsu" though resembling, is much different from "recognized" kungfu. Heavily accented by effortless ninjutsu movements, this is truly a self interpreted, customized style. Current reiatsu level now triples in preparation for the next stage. Notice: I have included its intermediate appearance so you observe that Hana Sasayaki does not loose its reiatsu draining black Sekkisekki blade. In this form, as you see, the blade has materialized into vapor; yet it still cuts as if completely whole. Accompanied by increased reach, it has the fluidity of a free floating vapor. I am able to attack at will from every side so long as its vapor is visible. Even when an opponent has the ability to move the air and/or create wind, Hana Sasayaki still drains as it is suffocating to the opponent's reiatsu when breathed in through the air. Currently I have a total of 3 techniques: 1.)*来る、端のささやき (Kuru, hana no sasayaki - It comes, whisper of the edge.)* 2.)*話せ、端ささやき (Hanase, Hana Sasayaki - Speak, Edge Whisper)* Spoiler: This command spells the end as Hana Sasayaki actually whispers audibly and can be literally heard on the battlefield saying: *"総全滅" (Kaijin - Total Annihilation).* This causes all vapors to lift the opponent's body, binding them near motionless as they seem to be engulfed in dark violet (almost black) vaporous fire. While all Hana Sasayaki's vapors are gathered in one place, the opponent struggles not to be stiffled by Hana Sasayaki's absorbance of their reiatsu. This technique enables me to perform Kaijin - Total Annihilation, a 177 count mid-air hit & hold combo that cuts, punches, kicks, and throws my signature "" shuriken. (I know what you're thinking, but remember, Hana Sasayaki is an all around zanpakutō having both power & kidou. Notwithstanding, it is also a vapor as well; capable of being suspended in mid-air.) (These characteristics give me the gift of airborne combat before Bankai is even initiated). This move uninterrupted spans about 15 seconds. Each calculated move is part of a disciplined equation in attempt to disrupt and disorient the opponent's ki channels (reiastu flow), all the while releasing my own which causes violet lightning to spit the sky during the length of the attack. (this pic of the sky during Kaijin - Total Annihilation shows the potential when executed in bankai) The ending blow is a most powerful roundhouse kick to the earth that I can substitute whispering (usually taunting in the opponents ear...) BANKAI. 3.)ばんじんで闇が動く、暗錯覚(Banjin de yami ga ugoku, Kuragari Sakkaku) (Darkness moves on the face of the deep, Dark Hallucination) Spoiler: This attack actually is a precursor for Bankai and is optimal when followed by Hana Sasayaki's final release. It causes the opponent to enter 暗錯覚 - Kuragari Sakkaku (Darkness Hallucination), a mental illusion which enables me to attack their mind's will... literally. This delusional monochrome dimension is a dark dessert without a moon. Yet, it is not without light.... this "perceived" light is actually a deception within itself... the ground is glowing and has the same characteristics as the black Sekkiseki stone feverishly zapping reiatsu with every step. By brute force mentally, it allows me to create a state of extreme mental confusion; and is completely invisible and undetected by any onlooker outside of the battle. Truly to the beholder, the fight would seem to progress without consequence to this technique, save the possible mental detachment the opponent may have during its execution. An unaccustomed or unaware opponent would find this quite perplexing and confounding to mid-combat progression. Stemming from mental management of reiatsu control; any injuries accepted as real during the struggle blacking out under the spell of Edge Whisper's Kuragari Sakkaku, result in actual physical wounds in reality... and you must defend yourself appropriately. BANKAI 致命的なささやく呼吸 - Sasayaki Enshi (Suffocating Whisper of Death) Spoiler: I still retain my Rokurumaken shuriken and all techniques, intensified in bankai as afore mentioned, but with added characteristics: Reiatsu roars up a crushing 8x as I release a sizable amount of my spirit's pressure and the entire surrounding area (1/4 mile radius) is blacked out into total darkness. The only light is the vapor from Sasayaki Enshi. Which once appeared black, now in darkness shows as violet smoke, painting a huge silhouette of his face. Behold the FINAL LEVEL, *致命的なささやく呼吸(Sasayaki Enshi - Suffocating Whisper of Death.)* Bankai pushes the envelope as my form smokes as well. Through Sasayaki Enshi's abilities I am now able to materialize into vapor mid-fight at any given time I choose. This is usually during shadow step, and may be implemented as an evasive maneuver if attacks are unavoidable and seen prior to contact. (logically speaking, the condition is that there is a way of escape, otherwise, vaporization is useless) 牽引アウト其の残滓之生命 (Kenin Auto Sono Zanshi no Seimei - Draw out the dregs of life...) Spoiler: Now hooded, I shroud my face in shadow. Chanting in the lowest whisper, I condense Hana Sasayaki's vapor through hand moves from the obscure ninjutsu arts: "無言中其の影, 其の声わ敵わない御座る拝聞牽引アウト其の残滓之生命" ("Mugon Naka Sono Kage, Sono Koe wa Kanawanai Gozaru Haibun... Kenin Auto Sono Zanshi no Seimei") ("Silence in the shadows, The voice that cannot be heard... draw out the dregs of life.") I manipulate the vapors to enter the oxygen pathways of my opponent's body. (the ears, mouth, nose, & eyes). Although for this attack it doesn't cut, Hana Sasayaki has always drained reiatsu and breath. It still does now, depleting the life force of the opponent. Causing the respiratory tract to begin to fail, the heart struggles not succumb to arrest. The lungs begin to rupture at worst to the point of hemorrhage. Slowly, as life departs the opponent, the last sense that leaves is ability to hear. At which Sasayaki Enshi reverberates from within, whispering departure saying: 生命ざりたった蒸気サヨナラ (Seimei Zari Tatta Jouki, Sayonara..." - "life is but a vapor, goodbye..." Any disturbance while performing this nullifies its effect further. Someone of ample level could definitely combat it, but their condition thereafter would be questionable. VIZARD MASK Spoiler: Sasayaki Enshi's Vizard Mask exposes the blackness of my soul yet it completely harnesses Sasayaki's vapors. All of Enshi's techniques and abilities are amplified by being augmented by hollowfication. Both Cero and Bala techniques have been added, in addition to my hollow's own creative interpretation of Sasayaki's martial style.

#4958 03-11-2011, 05:27 AM
Hisagi_Chan I'm a rocker and a roller too! Gotei 13 Shinigami Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Some place with loads of hills. Age: 26 Posts: 872 Gender:	Take a look at some of the blades in the hall of fame Zangetsu. There's some wind ones there so it might give you some ideas. __________________ Spoiler: Jakarru Kami no kashira (Head of the Jackal God) Spoiler: Sealed state: Spoiler: Jakarru Kami no Kashira is a 33" long Katana with a 28" blade and 5" hilt. The blade is black and curved more than usual, causing it to resemble a large sickle or hook on a shepherds crook. The Guard is a vibrant gold coloured octagon with Ankh's etched in to both sides at half centimetre intervals. The hilt of the katana is black to match the blade but wrapped neatly in a white, bandage like, material and topped in a gold coloured pommel cover.On the butt of the pommel cover is a small carving of a Jackals head. Inner World: Spoiler: The inner world is a desolate landscape of what seems to be white sand and rock. On closer inspection however the sand is revealed to be natron, a salt-like substance used to preserve mummies, and the rocks are the lower half of unused Canopic Jars made of calcite. A vicious wind blows through the landscape at all times, constantly changing the terrain and weighing the visitor down with a sense of dread caused by the thought that they may not escape. There is only one way in and out of this world and that is a black door, edged in a gold light, that is constantly changing position. Jakarru Kami no Kashira refers to the door as "The Souls Entrance" and only he is able to lead you to the door and to freedom. Spirit: Spoiler: The spirit of Jakarru Kami no Kashira is a small black jackal with a bandage around the neck, tied in to a bow. He is extremely silent and only speaks when he feels it is necessary for him to do so. His stare is somewhat unnerving, as if he is constantly weighing you up and deciding where to place you on his list. In stark contrast to his surroundings he is active all day, though more so at dawn and dusk, constantly gathering Natron and weighing it on his front paws. His calm demeanour and wise words earn him great respect and he will return that respect if he deems you worthy enough. The greatest form of respect he shows is allowing you to leave the inner world by guiding you to the door. Shikai Release Command: Anatatachi wa hakaru, Jakarru Kami no Kashira (Weigh them, Head of the Jackal God.) Appearance: Spoiler: Jakarru Kami no Kashira changes in to a spiked black wooden flail. It is made from two pieces of wood that are attached by a white 3" chain, like an overly large nunchuk, and are extremely durable. The handle (For lack of a better word) is 1.5m long and 1.5" in diameter. The spiked piece of wood is 1m long and 1.5" in diameter. It is covered in gold coloured metal spikes that are spaced half an inch either side and run down to the end of the wood. The tip of the spiked piece is curved upwards slightly to form a crude tearing or grappling hook. Abilities: Spoiler: In Shikai, Jakarru Kami no Kashira gains the ability to increase or decrease the power of its attacks by altering the weight of the spiked pole on the flail. The heavier the spiked pole becomes, the more damage is caused but it becomes harder to wield. The maximum the wielder can carry effectively is 135lbs (roughly 61kg) though it can go higher. The only time the maximum weight would be used is if the opponent was significantly larger than the wielder. Zenrei no Kachi (Worth of one's whole soul) This ability allows Jakarru Kami no Kashira to peer in to the opponents soul and weigh it against the feather of truth. If the soul is lighter than the feather by a great deal then any damage caused by Jakarru Kami no Kashira will be miniscule, even if the wound would normally kill. The heavier the soul the greater the damage and if the soul is heavier than the feather by a great margin even the smallest cut can be turned in to a life threatening injury. When this ability is used the wielder can see the soul being weighed by Jakkaru Kami no Kashira as a ghostly image in front of the opponent and can be seen by both opponent and wielder. It depicts Jakarru Kami no Kashira with a set of scales placed in front of him. On the right hand scale is the feather of truth and on the left hand scale is a blue light in the shape of a heart, representing the opponents soul. Once the soul is measured Jakarru Kami no Kashira returns to the inner world with the scales and feather of truth. In shikai the complete form of the opponent is needed to be seen, even if only for a second, in order for the soul to be weighed. Bankai: Jakarru Kami no Genri (Fundamental truth of the Jackal God) Activation: Spoiler: The wielder holds the flail horizontally across the chest and calls Bankai. There is then a flash of gold light and the Bankai is revealed. Appearance: Spoiler: The flail becomes a two headed axe on a gold coloured shaft, approx. 1.8m in length and 1.5" in diameter. The axes are positioned on each end, like the heads of a shovel, and crescent shaped. They're both a gold colour to match the shaft and engraved with a black Jackal head on each flat side. Approx. 14" in diametre they are razor sharp and extremely light, allowing for a faster swing or slash. The wielders head becomes encased in a black metal mask in the shape of a Jackal head. They are covered from the base of the neck, all the way to the top of the head and ears and a snout protrude several inches in their correct places. The mask itself is covered in a fine gold filligree of swirls and ankhs whilst the eye sockets seem to glow a blazing white. Although appearing to be heavy it allows for fluent movement and all around vision, leaving no blind spots except natural ones. Spoiler: The wielders clothing changes to a metallic gold skirt and halter top that exposes the midriff. The skirt itself is calf length and splits up the front to allow movement, with a simple black cloth hanging to keep everything covered. On the top of the skirt is a chain belt with charms made up of ankhs that matches an anklet on the wielders right ankle. The top is tied at the neck and back tightly to keep it secure and moveable and the wielder is left barefoot. On the wielders upper left arm is a simple gold armlet in the shape of a jackal. Spoiler: Abilities: Spoiler: The wielder gains a significant speed and strength boost, allowing them to move with the speed and agility of a Jackal and lift twice as much as before. The legs of the user are also inbued with strength allowing for kicks powerful enough to break rock and the ability to jump to extreme heights. (In testing the highest the user has ever jumped is just over 9m.) The abilities from Shikai are also boosted, raising the weight limit of the weapon to 270lbs (122kg) and allowing both ends of the axe to change weight. Zenrei no Kachi now needs only a split second glimps of any part of the opponents body in order to weigh the soul and the users reiatsu rises by approx. 70%. Hantei no Omori (Weight of Judgement) Spoiler: This ability brings forth the sense of dread that is present in the inner world of Jakarru Kami no Kashira. It presses down on the opponent and makes them nervous and jittery, instilling a sense of paranoia that can potentially disable the opponent. In the most extreme cases it can cause a state of live mummification, dry-freezing the opponent on the spot completely. Fighting Style: Spoiler: During the sealed state of Jakkaru Kami no Kashira the wielder uses a form of Ninjutsu that focuses on the use of Kama and Kusarigama. The aim is to trap and block the opponents weapons, disarming them or disabling them as quickly as possible. The sickled shape of the blade is perfect for this style and often catches opponents off guard as they expect the vicious looking blade to slash and rip. However due to the curve of the blade it is very difficult to slash and easier to trap weapons and limbs whilst still causing damage. Decapitation however is quite suited to the blade. During Shikai the user switches to a mix of Bojutsu, the Okinawan style centred on the use of a six foot staff, and Tahtib, an Ancient Egyptian style that is focused on head shots and distraction, often being flamboyant and graceful. The spiked flail that completes the staff is the perfect distraction method, the opponent often too busy focusing on what they consider to be the dangerous end and forgetting about the range of the handle itself. This allows the wielder to fully utilise both parts of the weapon for both attack and defense. During Bankai the user once again switches styles. Whilst keeping the use of Tahtib they forgo the Okinawan Bojutsu and replace it with the Northern Chinese Staff. This allows the user to focus more on cutting and swinging, whilst at the same time defending and aiming for the vital areas such as the head, rib cage, stomach and back in order to cause the most damage. The users increased speed, strength and agility also helps with this style as they can still attack from unusual positions, never wasting a movement, being quick on defense and increasing the power of their strikes. During all three states the user rarely uses Kido and if it is used it is more of a distraction method or lure in order to set a trap. Any hand to hand that is used is centred on the Wushu style, using the wielders flexibility and initiative to the greatest advantage they can. FC's Spoiler: Owner of Spoiler: Co-Owner of Spoiler: FC'S Spoiler:

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Geles ... Civillian Join Date: Feb 2011 Posts: 70 Gender:	xD thanks a lot for the criticism, ive pretty much totally reworked it as a result. And yes I know I dont need to join a division to have shikai, i just prefer it that way. I also know that you don't do characters here, i just entered a character for my pleasure so please ignore that. I still need the japanese translations so ill pm those members you mentioned. I went for a spirit focused on cutting or (rending) his opponent. Spoiler: Zanpakuto name-Violent Darkness Shinigami/Fighting Style- Spoiler: Bio- One of the few Shinigami who can recall his past in the world of the living. He graduated a year earlier than all his classmates in the shinigami academy and came to be accepted into the 10th division under captain Icy_. He struggles greatly with his want to keep the peace and his inner anger. His goal is to protect Soul Society and his friends. Fighting style- Only having average strength, his advantage was in Kido, swordmanship, and speed. Using a combination of the 3 to outwit his enemies and score blows on them before they could react. His fighting style is acrobatic and quick, being able to deliver a great amount of blows in a short time and dodge an enemies strikes with shunpo. Being ambidextrous he can wield both katana with ease. Kido is a heavy part of his arsenal, using it everytime he gets a chance and often catching his opponent off guard. Realm- Spoiler: The realm is desolate and dark, surrounded by high peaks shrouded in shadow. The rocky, harsh landscape seems to trail on and on through valleys and over high peaks of rock endlessly. The rock of this land is a hard as steel and cannot be cut or destroyed except with great force. The land is only illuminated where you walk, elsewhere the darkness closes in. Spirit- Spoiler: The spirit is always to be found there, an king of darkness and shadow himself. In the form of a great lion he is shown, at a height of 6 feet he rivals most men. It almost seems that he melds into the very darkness of the land about him, appearing deceptively insubstantial. Extremely fast, he bounds amongst the mountains of his realm seemingly without effort. Having a fierce disposition he confronts you aggressively, but those who do not back down will have his undying respect and loyalty. Quick to anger, yet also swift to desire justice for his friends and bring violent retribution upon his foes. Sealed- Spoiler: In its sealed form it is a separated into two katana's, each at a length of two feet. The hilt is black above and underneath. An ornate, oval, dark guard protects the users hands. Shikai- Spoiler: Release command-Rend Upon release the user is enveloped in a explosion of shadow. His shikai is extremely unique and one of the few to have two blades. Both are dark and sinister; being submered in deep, twisting shadow. One would expect them to be Daisho but they are twins in length. Neither has a guard and both are a length of 30 inches. Along the blade of each are engraved designs that cannot be discerned beneath the shadow twisting over them. Two ornate sheaths are upon the left side of the body, both similar in design to the swords. Abilities- At all times in Shikai the user has no shadow. Shadow Slice Spoiler: The user can create another image of an attack from his blade with the shadows upon his shikai that is identical to the original. It can occur at any time the user desires and the user can attack before, during, or after using the technique. The shadow blade will do no actual damage and pass right through the body. It is meant to deceive the opponent by making them block an attack that will not actually hit, leaving them open for the true attack with the same blade or the other blade. At the same token they may ignore an attack that is the real one as the technique may switch order from the real blade being first and the shadow blade being second. The shadow blade must follow or precede the path of the real attack from the same blade (if one occurs) and this technique may be used on both blades at once. Accumulation Spoiler: After each successful cut the blade gains more strength and becomes more submersed in shadow. As cuts upon the opponents body increase the cutting power of the blade goes up. When cut by the blade the cut will go deeper than the slash originally appears as the shadow will reach into the opponents body. After each cut the distance increases by a half inch. Eventually even the smallest slash can be a fatal wound if the opponent is not careful, yet this technique only works if it draws blood and also is effective with shadow slice. Black Sheath Spoiler: Sheathing the blades causes the user to disperse into shadow and reform at any shadow in the area no matter how large or small. The user cannot remain in this form and must have a shadow in sight to use the technique. Upon reaching the shadow he is rematerialized with his blades no longer in the sheath. This process occurs at twice the maximum speed of the user in shunpo. So as the user gets faster, so does the technique. Last edited by Geles; 03-12-2011 at 05:17 AM

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03-12-2011, 12:00 PM

Shadow Reaper

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@OG: The bankai passive ability is just emission of infrasound. Since the opponent knows the zan they're up against uses sound, and they probably don't read wikipedia mid-battle, they're unprepared to deal with this ability.

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Zanpakuto name-Violent Darkness

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So yeah, being ambidextrous makes your opponent capable of using two identical blades, but we don't have a reason for them to have two blades in the first place.

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