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Old 07-21-2012, 10:16 PM
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My Zanpakuto- Akuma no Tatchi
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Release Command: Makari deruto sorera ni jigoku no tatchi o ataeru- Come forth and give them a touch of hell

The Spirit of Akuma no Tatchi
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Inner world
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The sky has a red glow to it with no sun or clouds in sight. The air has an eery chill to it; almost making me not want to breathe. The landscape is an open flat area surrounded by narrow,and jagged looking mountains with no way to climb or even see over. In the center is a massive throne where I can usually find Akuma no Tatchi sitting.


Sealed
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Standard Katana Length- 42in.
The wrapping is maroon with 2 tassels hanging on the top side of the handle. The tsuba (Pommel) is a made of silver and an odd black colored metal. On top of the black metal is a yellow jewel. The guard is rectangular and has two images of a demon's right hand. The sheath is also a maroon color and has a steel cap on the end that is angled and sharpened. The blade is made out of the same black metal used in the pommel.


Shikai
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Handle length-12in.
Blade length- 42in.
The wrapping on the handle is maroon, and has the same tassels hanging on the handle. The tsuba is longer and has more of the black metal spread out with silver inlays around it and has a large round yellow jewel on top. The hand guard is still rectangular but has 2 points that stick out on the top and bottom sides. The points have somewhat of an edge. The blade resembles the blade of a scythe and is made out of the black metal.

Attacks
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Namakemono no Tatchi-Touch of Sloth
the Touch of Sloth concentrates reiryoku to the very tip of the blade. When the blade connects with an opponent's arm or leg, that part begins to move a lot slower than it normally would. If my Zan touches an opponent in the torso area the Touch of Sloth will randomly attack a limb of it's choosing. The effects of the Touch of Sloth last for around 15 minutes. After striking a limb more than once, the time which it lasts will decrease by 1 minute after every strike to the opponent.

Ikari no Tatchi-Touch of Wrath
The Touch of Wrath concentrates reiryoku along the edge of the blade and when it connects with target, it releases the energy as a small explosion that damages the limb it made contact with. The explosion is enough to knock the opponent off balance. It will not destroy the limb, but will do damage. It could be compared to the damage done by a Bala. The blade has to connect with the target or the attack won't work

Yokubo No Tatchi-Touch of Lust
The Touch of Lust creates an Heated energy shield that will hold off the force of the full force of an energy based attack from a shikai level zanpakuto. It will block Ice based attacks but is useless against fire based attacks both at shikai level.


Bankai
Aku mao no Tatchi- The Devil King's Touch

When my Bankai is activated a faint laugh can be heard coming from my Zan as I let go of the handle. It begins to levitate then with a burst reiatsu turning the sky red. Following the instant this happens, all the reiatsu to burst out, all the reiryoku gets sucked back into the Zan changing its shape into the Aku mao no Tatchi

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Handle Length-52in.
Blade Length-42in.
The handle becomes longer becomes a solid maroon color. The brace that holds the blade to the handle still retains it's rectangular shape. A small diamond shaped spear point appears on the top of the handle. It still has the same type of pommel that was on the Shikai form. The blade is just moved to the top where it takes the form of a scythe. A smaller blade begins to stick out on the opposite side of the main blade. *the smaller blade can only be used for basic attacks.*

Attacks
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Namakemono no O Tatchi-King's Touch of Sloth
The King's Touch of Sloth concentrates reiryoku to the point of the blade. When connected with an opponent, the attack is similar to the shikai version but it will attack their entire body causing them to move slower than normal. The effects last over a time period of 10 minutes. This attack can be used multiple times.

Ikari no O Tatchi-King's Touch of Wrath
The King's touch of Wrath concentrates the energy along the edge of blade and when it connects with a target, it sends out energy in a explosion causing massive damage to the target that received the blow.

can also use the normal Touch of Wrath.
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Old 07-22-2012, 12:53 PM
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Old 07-23-2012, 01:19 AM
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If anyone knows Japanese and sees something that needs to be corrected, please do. I'm using Google Translate for everything and I'm sure that there will be some things that need to be changed. I have not read through this entire thread due to an extreme case of laziness so my apologies if I have similar ideas to anyone who's already posted.

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Name: Hikari no Tenshi (Angel of Light)

Type: Melee/Kido

Sealed Form: Traditional Japanese Katana, 40" (29" Blade); The saya is black with an elegant cross engraved at the center on each side. The hilt of the sword is white Ray-Skin covered in black braid cord and the handguard is in the shape of a black cyclone.

Spirit Form: Hikari no Tenshi (known simply as "Tenshi" to me) is a tall and slender young woman with very light skin and long snowy white hair. The irises of her eyes are majestic gold, her pupils and sclera are white and a golden halo floats above her head. Her body is toned and shaped like a swimsuit model. She wears a white leotard with an opening from just below her neck to just above her navel revealing her inner cleavage, a long white skirt with slits on both sides from the bottom up to just below her waist, a golden sash tied around her waist, sheer white thigh high stockings with gold trim, white shoes with straps that wrap around her calves and fasten below her knees. She is soft spoken and well-mannered (Think Tsubaki from Soul Eater) however extremely focused, sharp and cunning in battle. Her fighting style is primarily Kenjutsu with some elements of Battojutsu.

Shikai - I can't draw so I'm using a modified version of my main CAS from Soul Calibur V. Tenshi Shikai

Bankai - I'm still working on perfecting her Bankai form (as far as the picture is concerned), but when she's in Bankai she gains a pair of wings as well as Royal Blue and Gold armlets worn on her forearms and above her biceps. In addition her white sclera becomes Royal Blue. Tenshi Bankai

Inner World - The ground is a sea of clouds and the sky is bright and endless, but the sun is absent so no shadows are ever produced. Whenever I enter my inner world Tenshi is found sitting very lady-like on a throne of clouds with her sword form in her lap. Behind her throne a golden castle can be seen in the distance.

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Shikai: Released with the command, "Shine, Hikari no Tenshi". The immense reiatsu that released upon activation destroys the right sleeve of my Shihakusho. The sword grows to 48" (35" blade). The blade slightly straightens and becomes pure white. The hilt is white Ray-Skin wrapped in white braid cord. The tsuba takes the shape of a golden halo and there's an ornament shaped like a pair of angel wings attached to the habaki. In addition the saya extends to fit the length of the Shikai blade and becomes white. The cross engraving is royal blue and gold.

Abilities - Hikari no Tenshi is a rather balanced zanpakuto, because it implies both direct attacks (melee) and support/defensive techniques (kido).

Seiken (Sacred Sword) - Hikari no Tenshi's signature attack. It has three variations (two used in Shikai and one in Bankai). "Seiken" is single blue wave of spirit energy that's fired from the edge of the blade in the shape of a blade that explodes on contact with its target.

Shin no Seiken (True Sacred Sword) - The second variation is an omni-directional attack used to counter being surrounded by opponents. Upon raising Hikari no Tenshi above my head and pointing it towards the sky, the blade begins to glow and ten white halo shaped waves of reiatsu erupt from the sword and expand towards my opponents cutting through everything within a 50m radius. Due to reiatsu consumption I can only use this variation once every 30 minutes.

Amenome (Heaven's Eye) - My only defensive technique. By sticking Hikari no Tenshi's saya into the ground I cover myself or anyone I'm trying to defend in a white spherical barrier capable of guarding against a large scale explosion.

Ten no Hikari (Heaven's Light) - My support technique. With a short prayer (still working on what's said) and a gentle wave of Hikari no Tenshi, I (or someone I'm trying to help) am covered in a translucent veil of spirit energy that rapidly heals wounds and provides clarity if any senses have been disoriented. Due to this ability being completely overpowered, it uses nearly all of my reiatsu and as a result I cannot use it in battle.

Tamashi no Ken (Soul Sword) - By shouting "Tenshi!!!" and releasing my Zanpakuto from my grasp this technique allows me to transform Hikari no Tenshi into her Spirit Form and fight alongside her. When using this technique I am limited to Hakuda and Kido as Tenshi is in full control of all her techniques.


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Bankai: Tengoku no Tamashi (Heaven's Soul) - Activated by yelling "Ban Kai... Take Flight, Tengoku no Tamashi". Hikari no Tenshi makes no visible change, but the top of my Shihakusho is blown off and a majestic pair of fully functional 8ft angel wings adorn my back and my irises become golden similar to Tenshi's. All of my techniques are enhanced and I have access to three other techniques.

Abilities:

Seiken - Enhanced version of Shikai attack. Now white and outlined in blue and produces a larger explosion upon contact with my enemy.

Shin no Seiken - Enhanced version of Shikai attack now produces up to 100 golden halo-shaped waves of reiatsu.

Amenome - Enhanced version of Shikai technique. Stronger defensive abilities and the length of time the technique is extended.

Ten no Hikari - Enhanced version of Shikai technique. Reiatsu consumption is not as overwhelming so I'm able to use it while in battle.

Tamashi no Ken - Same as Shikai. Tenshi now appears in her Bankai form.

Saigo no Seiken, Tenken (Final Sacred Sword, Heavenly Sword) - The blade of Tengoku no Tamashi becomes golden and with one swing I unleash a barrage of Shikai level Seiken attacks. The number of attacks is determined by the amount of reiatsu I have at the time I use the attack.

Heaven's Legion - Going along with my ideals, I visualize everyone I wish to protect as I build up my reiatsu. After building it to its maximum, I fly towards the clouds. When I point Tengoku no Tamashi towards the clouds the sky seems to open up revealing what can only be described as the gates of heaven and angelic beings resembling everyone I wish to protect appear and rain down on my opponent causing a huge explosion. This technique uses up nearly all of my reiatsu and is one of my two final attacks.

Tamashi no Yugo (Soul Fusion) - After using Tamashi no Ken I can use this technique to temporarily fuse my soul with Tengoku no Tamashi and use my second final attack. In this form I have golden irises and royal blue sclera similar to Tenshi's Bankai form. In addition the hakama of my Shihakusho is white and tattered and I have six wings adorning my back.

Shi no Tenshi (Angel of Death) - Upon activation my wings shatter one by one and the feathers surround my opponent and I in a sphere similar to Byakuya's Gokei. After a moment the feathers converge on us from all directions piercing through anything and everything in their way. Sacrificial attack unless I get healed immediately after using it. Uses all my reiatsu and even when healed I cannot fight for over a month as I wait for my reiatsu to return.


That was actually harder than I thought. Be gentle critics! lol.

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Old 07-25-2012, 12:57 PM
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hello all did you miss me ive been gone for so long but now im back and omnious if you would my kind sir please do tell me how i can improve on my zanpakuto
jigoku no akumu (hells nightmare)
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sealed
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the look black leather sheath with a steel double edged katana hilt decoration is a sun and a moon facing each other with black onyx set into the guard the sun and moon are silver and gold each with one eye and one piece of a mouth that connects together
33 inch long blade


my inner world

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the innerworld is basically
a huge forest filled with a never ending canopy of trees and as you get closer to the center it changes. into a desert then a crater filled with blazing heat and in the middle is jigoku
their personalities are very strange jigoku is centered around strength and power always pushing me to train and become stronger while akumu is about stealth wanting me to observe my enemy before I attack they often get into arguments about strategy and such



shinkai activation

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Ok the look of this sword after is about a 2 foot wide blade now
your time is now jigoku no akumu
if i choose jigoku to help a fissure opens up were the blade touches the ground and barbed chains shoot out and rip chunks of flesh out of their body. while if i choose akumu they start seeing there loved ones slaughtered around them


bankai

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Akai jigoku kuro akumu:red hell black nightmare

upon activation two skeletal hands come up and close around me when they open my armour is now a thing made of bones tightly moved together to create a set of armour it mimics my bodys skeletal structure except more tightly interwoven with plates over the abdomen and uncovered parts of the back and sides and neck


then the sword basicly becomes a huge double headed scythe with two chains comeing down with the decorations of the sun and moon

In bankai form I can take the scythe’s weights and connect them together making them form a sort of another blade

also bankai is the only time when it stops argueing with its other head and works together as one attack


bankai test
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while most soul reapers had to fight there zanpakuto into sumbmission i did not i helped out jigoku no akumu by sorting out one of his many arguements and he gave me a gift as a sign of his friendship he put his finger to my temple and caused horrible migranes coupled with hallucinations fatigue the hallucinations showed people I cared for being slaughtered. The migranes felt like my head was being ripped apart and the fatuigue made sure I couldn’t run from it I had to stay and suffer through it this all lasted about 3 weeks I almost died from it




vizard mask

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the mask resembles a human skull except with long curling rams horns comeing out of the top and long fangs for the canine teeth instead of regular ones

the ability added in this attack is cero sobrevivientes (zero survivors)

the effect of this cero is it takes the users reiastsu and turns it into a byproduct wich rots the evironment around it
color: forest green



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My Zanpakutō:
端ささやき - Hana Sasayaki - Edge Whisper
Zanpakutō fighting style: 忍術 - Ninjutsu

Inner World:
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A perpetual full moon night with an under developed terrain; spotted with flowered trees and sparse shrubbery. There is a constant casual breeze felt at all times, always rising and falling. As if by mirage, a 7-story pagoda vaporizes into view at the will of my zanpakutō. It is his dojo. In this world undisturbed is no sound, save the wind and his whisperings.
Sasayaki Enshi's TRUE FORM
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the book contains his secret art form and is written in his language.

Before I learned his name, Hana Sasayaki rendered hallucinations of his realm and shadowed figure. At first terrified, I mistook his figure as Death himself seeking combat. To stand in his presence took my very breath and his gaze made movement arduous. While training, randomly he'd draw me into my inner world. At the point we parried in combat, my breath waned as his faint whispers fell upon my ears. This we did for a time until I strengthened and was able to make out his words... Hana Sasayaki.

Communication in its early stages was only achieved with a careful ear. Hana Sasayaki finds the lack of light tranquil... nonetheless, incandescent shadow is his most comfortable environment.

By moonlight, he reads and scribes his secret art form in a book engraved with his shuriken.
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端ささやき 六尺棒 & 車剣 - Hana Sasayaki Rokushakubō & Rokukurumaken
(Edge Whisper Six Shaku Staff w/ Six Shuriken)



Fighting style: 棒術 & 手裏剣術 - Bōjutsu & Shurikenjutsu
(staff & throwing technique)

length: 6 ft (1.82 m)
thickness: 1.5 inches (3.81 cm)
weight: 12.5 lbs

Each metal link and shuriken is encased with black Sekkiseki stone, the purest & rarest of this stone ever to be found. Notice: It is the nature of black Sekkiseki stone to drain reiatsu. My spirit pressure is only concealed by this; as it was chiseled & reiatsu blasted by my own reiatsu during my reclusive training deep within the Sekkiseki mines as I called upon it for the first time). Still under investigation by The Shinigami Research Institute of Technology... it is yet to be determined if it is to be officially labeled as strength or kidō based. However, it is clear that Hana Sasayaki is one of the rarest of zanpakutō, and appears to be equally balanced by both power and ability. Unlike any other zanpakuto ever documented in record before, it is made entirely of tamahagane. Though the encasing in its rare stone provides some rigidity, the interlocking links allow for a generous amount of flexibility. Note: The shuriken bag is worn concealed within my belt.
Shikai Form I
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Release command: 慈悲無し、妥協無し、端ささやき
(Jihi nashi, dakyou nashi, Hana Sasayaki)
(There is no mercy, There is no compromise, Edge Whisper)


(Yes, at the base of the blade is: 端ささやき (Hana Sasayaki - Edge Whisper)

Fighting style: 体術, 手裏剣術 - Wushu Taijutsu & Shurikenjutsu
(close quarter & throwing technique)


In shikai's first form, opposite of tradition, Hana Sasayaki takes the form of a katana along with its 車剣 - Rokurumaken (round shuriken). Notwithstanding, it is worn in the traditional tachi of the ninjutsu, having its saya placed on my back, wrapped intricately into my Wushu Gi (custom sleeveless ninja uniform).

My zanpakutō's substance is the absence of light and sound. This gives me a shadow step that could go almost undetected by captain level. Truly, in broad daylight, you may sense me, but you more than likely won't see me until its nigh too late. Notice: Hana Sasayaki's blade has taken on the color and reiatsu draining characteristics of the black Sekkiseki stone.

Added bonus is the technique:
1.)来る端のささやき (Kuru, hana no sasayaki - It comes, whisper of the edge...)
Which is largly due to my increased speed; this is actually zanjutsu crossbred with shunpo technique. Its speed is so absolute, that it is quite often unseen by slower opponents, and this renders the attack almost completely silent. To an opponent approaching my speed level, this would give my zanpakutō the ability to appear as 10 vaporous swords trailing in one swipe. (If my opponent is even fast enough to see that...) Its motivation is to eliminate the threat immediately; whether by maiming or fatality. Though the sound mimics the faintest whisper when swiped through the air, any interference in its path of motion from another reiatsu weapon causes a violet spark at the instant the weapons contact. Instantaneously, during this very brief moment, Hana Sasayaki samples reiatsu from the opponent's zanpakutō. While this is not draining to the opponent's zan, it allows me to quantify the battle. Only brief contact is advised. (When cut, the opponent finds Hana Sasayaki not only draws blood; but is also stifling, making it more and more difficult to breath.)
Shikai Form II
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Release command: 無敵で静粛なる恐怖の影、端ささやき!
(Muteki de seishuku naru kyoufu no kage, Hana Sasayaki)
(Shadow of the invincible, silent fear, Edge Whisper)




段平 Danbira (Japanese broadsword) & 車剣 - Rokurumaken (round shuriken)
24" black Sekkiseki blade
4" wide at largest point
Futasujibi (dual ridged shinogi)
12" black Sekkiseki tsuka


Fighting style: 体術, 手裏剣術 - Wushu Taijutsu & Shurikenjutsu

My close quarter combat "Wushu Taijutsu" though resembling, is much different from "recognized" kungfu. Heavily accented by effortless ninjutsu movements, this is truly a self interpreted, customized style.

Current reiatsu level now triples in preparation for the next stage. Notice: I have included its intermediate appearance so you observe that Hana Sasayaki does not loose its reiatsu draining black Sekkisekki blade. In this form, as you see, the blade has materialized into vapor; yet it still cuts as if completely whole. Accompanied by increased reach, it has the fluidity of a free floating vapor. I am able to attack at will from every side so long as its vapor is visible. Even when an opponent has the ability to move the air and/or create wind, Hana Sasayaki still drains as it is suffocating to the opponent's reiatsu when breathed in through the air.

Currently I have a total of 3 techniques:

1.)来る、端のささやき (Kuru, hana no sasayaki - It comes, whisper of the edge.)

2.)話せ、端ささやき (Hanase, Hana Sasayaki - Speak, Edge Whisper)
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This command spells the end as Hana Sasayaki actually whispers audibly and can be literally heard on the battlefield saying: "総全滅" (Kaijin - Total Annihilation). This causes all vapors to lift the opponent's body, binding them near motionless as they seem to be engulfed in dark violet (almost black) vaporous fire. While all Hana Sasayaki's vapors are gathered in one place, the opponent struggles not to be stiffled by Hana Sasayaki's absorbance of their reiatsu. This technique enables me to perform Kaijin - Total Annihilation, a 177 count mid-air hit & hold combo that cuts, punches, kicks, and throws my signature "" shuriken. (I know what you're thinking, but remember, Hana Sasayaki is an all around zanpakutō having both power & kidou. Notwithstanding, it is also a vapor as well; capable of being suspended in mid-air.) (These characteristics give me the gift of airborne combat before Bankai is even initiated). This move uninterrupted spans about 15 seconds. Each calculated move is part of a disciplined equation in attempt to disrupt and disorient the opponent's ki channels (reiastu flow), all the while releasing my own which causes violet lightning to spit the sky during the length of the attack. (this pic of the sky during Kaijin - Total Annihilation shows the potential when executed in bankai)



The ending blow is a most powerful roundhouse kick to the earth that I can substitute whispering (usually taunting in the opponents ear...) BANKAI.
3.)ばんじんで闇が動く、 暗錯覚(Banjin de yami ga ugoku, Kuragari Sakkaku)
(Darkness moves on the face of the deep, Dark Hallucination)
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This attack actually is a precursor for Bankai and is optimal when followed by Hana Sasayaki's final release. It causes the opponent to enter 暗錯覚 - Kuragari Sakkaku (Darkness Hallucination), a mental illusion which enables me to attack their mind's will... literally.



This delusional monochrome dimension is a dark dessert without a moon. Yet, it is not without light.... this "perceived" light is actually a deception within itself... the ground is glowing and has the same characteristics as the black Sekkiseki stone feverishly zapping reiatsu with every step. By brute force mentally, it allows me to create a state of extreme mental confusion; and is completely invisible and undetected by any onlooker outside of the battle. Truly to the beholder, the fight would seem to progress without consequence to this technique, save the possible mental detachment the opponent may have during its execution. An unaccustomed or unaware opponent would find this quite perplexing and confounding to mid-combat progression. Stemming from mental management of reiatsu control; any injuries accepted as real during the struggle blacking out under the spell of Edge Whisper's Kuragari Sakkaku, result in actual physical wounds in reality... and you must defend yourself appropriately.
BANKAI 致命的なささやく呼吸 - Sasayaki Enshi
(Suffocating Whisper of Death)
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I still retain my Rokurumaken shuriken and all techniques, intensified in bankai as afore mentioned, but with added characteristics: Reiatsu roars up a crushing 8x as I release a sizable amount of my spirit's pressure and the entire surrounding area (1/4 mile radius) is blacked out into total darkness. The only light is the vapor from Sasayaki Enshi. Which once appeared black, now in darkness shows as violet smoke, painting a huge silhouette of his face.


Behold the FINAL LEVEL, 致命的なささやく呼吸(Sasayaki Enshi - Suffocating Whisper of Death.) Bankai pushes the envelope as my form smokes as well. Through Sasayaki Enshi's abilities I am now able to materialize into vapor mid-fight at any given time I choose. This is usually during shadow step, and may be implemented as an evasive maneuver if attacks are unavoidable and seen prior to contact. (logically speaking, the condition is that there is a way of escape, otherwise, vaporization is useless)

牽引 アウト 其の 残滓 之 生命
(Kenin Auto Sono Zanshi no Seimei - Draw out the dregs of life...)
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Now hooded, I shroud my face in shadow. Chanting in the lowest whisper, I condense Hana Sasayaki's vapor through hand moves from the obscure ninjutsu arts:

"無言 中 其の 影, 其の 声 わ 敵わない 御座る 拝聞 牽引 アウト 其の 残滓 之 生命"
("Mugon Naka Sono Kage, Sono Koe wa Kanawanai Gozaru Haibun...
Kenin Auto Sono Zanshi no Seimei")
("Silence in the shadows, The voice that cannot be heard...
draw out the dregs of life.")


I manipulate the vapors to enter the oxygen pathways of my opponent's body. (the ears, mouth, nose, & eyes). Although for this attack it doesn't cut, Hana Sasayaki has always drained reiatsu and breath. It still does now, depleting the life force of the opponent. Causing the respiratory tract to begin to fail, the heart struggles not succumb to arrest. The lungs begin to rupture at worst to the point of hemorrhage. Slowly, as life departs the opponent, the last sense that leaves is ability to hear. At which Sasayaki Enshi reverberates from within, whispering departure saying: 生命 ざり たった 蒸気 サヨナラ (Seimei Zari Tatta Jouki, Sayonara..." - "life is but a vapor, goodbye..."

Any disturbance while performing this nullifies its effect further. Someone of ample level could definitely combat it, but their condition thereafter would be questionable.
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I think my zanpakuto would look like my actual sword (black and red ribbons woven around the handle), beaten and chipped in it's sealed form. In it's shikai form it would look like a shortsword with a crimson blade. It would be a kido type zanpakuto, that could drive a person crazy. That's all I can think of so far.
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Name: Kaguro (black fire)
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A standard-sized katana with a dark blue hilt and sheath. It has a square silver guard with the corners protruding out in a triangular fashion.

Shikai
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The release command is "Transcend". To activate, the sealed sword is resheathed before declaring the release, then unsheathing it, accompanied by a blue, flame-like burst upon release. The blade is now much longer (approx. 5 feet) with a crystalline texture surrounded by a black, flame-like aura. The hilt is also changed, having a silver skull attached to the pommel and red cloth strips wrapped around the handle. The guard remains the same. Resheathing it returns it to it's sealed state. Kaguro is a dark-type zanpakuto.
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Chaotic Rip - By swinging the sword, a wave of reiatsu is released that leaves a trail of distortion, capable of cleaving through solid stone.
Chaotic Sunder - A multiplied version of Chaotic Rip where a barrage of sword waves are released to demolish the target.
Dark Star - By plunging the blade into the ground, five giant, heavily-curved, bluish-black energy blades burst around me from the ground before slamming the ground outward.
Absolute Emptiness - By adopting a pierce stance, bluish-black reiatsu surrounds the blade, resembling a lance. By thrusting forward, the reiatsu near-instantaneously extends to 10 meters, impaling the target.

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Maken Kaguro (demon blade black fire): When activated, a column of bluish-black reiatsu is released before a sonic boom dispels it, revealing my Bankai form. The sword has thickened to resemble an over-sized single-edged crystalline bluish broadsword with the hilt evened with the blunt end. The handle and pommel remain the same as in Shikai, although the guard has vanished. Along the length of the blade on one side are four runic symbols that emit a cyan glow. In addition, my Bankai adorns me with a high-collared, dark-blue overcoat with red edges and an open front with a silk-like texture that stops just below my knees. The coat is split into four coattails, similar to insect wings. This coat is surprisingly durable, acting like lightweight armor.
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Maken Kaguro enhances all of it's former Shikai abilities with a bluish-black reiatsu.

Devil Rip - The true form of Chaotic Rip, capable of bisecting reinforced steel with ease.
Devil Sunder - The true form of Chaotic Sunder which in addition to Devil Rip's potential of each slash, can repel most incoming attacks that are in it's path.
Black Thorn - By stabbing the ground with my Bankai, a single giant blade impales any enemy within 10 meters before exploding in a burst of reiatsu.
Absolute Despair - Reiatsu gathers into the blade, engulfing it in a blue flame. This temporarily enhances the physical attacks of my sword to the maximum, distorting the air with each swing. At any time, the flames can be fired from the blade by using Absolute Emptiness, incinerating the target.
Dying Sun - Maken Kaguro's strongest technique. The energy from one of the runic charges is gathered onto the tip of the blade, creating a giant black plasma coil. The sphere is then fired at the target and, upon contact with the target's reiatsu, instantly expands to the size of a Gillian. Gravity then causes the colossal sphere to slowly sink and grind into the ground, leaving a steep, smouldering crater in it's wake. Once the bottom reaches 1000 meters, the sphere then erupts, sending a column of bluish-black reiatsu into the sky. This technique cannot be used if no runic charges are present and need 24 hours to completely recharge if all four charges are used.

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A black-winged angel with an enormous wingspan that could easily conceal himself. He wears a form-fitting dark blue robe with decorative red edges that appears to be made of silk (similar to the Bankai) with long sleeves that usually hide his hands and completely conceals his feet, giving him a truly majestic appearance. He has long, messy black hair that reaches past his shoulders with two large strands framing his face and a large red scarf that hides half his face, only showing his green eyes. He has ghostly pale skin with long blood-red talon-like nails. Interestingly, on each wing, four feathers are larger than the rest, hanging further and evenly spaced apart with a blue glowing runic symbol emblazoned on the end (the same runes as the Bankai's blade).

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Kaguro is a very stoical and quiet spirit, rarely showing emotion if at all. He usually acts like a guiding light, encouraging me to go above and beyond to achieve my potential. He is almost always seen floating and with his hands in his sleeves, like one does with kimono sleeves and rarely blinks. His voice is quiet and calm.


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端ささやき - Hana Sasayaki - Edge Whisper
Zanpakutō fighting style: 忍術 - Ninjutsu

Inner World:
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A perpetual full moon night with an under developed terrain; spotted with flowered trees and sparse shrubbery. There is a constant casual breeze felt at all times, always rising and falling. As if by mirage, a 7-story pagoda vaporizes into view at the will of my zanpakutō. It is his dojo. In this world undisturbed is no sound, save the wind and his whisperings.
Sasayaki Enshi's TRUE FORM
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the book contains his secret art form and is written in his language.

Before I learned his name, Hana Sasayaki rendered hallucinations of his realm and shadowed figure. At first terrified, I mistook his figure as Death himself seeking combat. To stand in his presence took my very breath and his gaze made movement arduous. While training, randomly he'd draw me into my inner world. At the point we parried in combat, my breath waned as his faint whispers fell upon my ears. This we did for a time until I strengthened and was able to make out his words... Hana Sasayaki.

Communication in its early stages was only achieved with a careful ear. Hana Sasayaki finds the lack of light tranquil... nonetheless, incandescent shadow is his most comfortable environment.

By moonlight, he reads and scribes his secret art form in a book engraved with his shuriken.
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端ささやき 六尺棒 & 車剣 - Hana Sasayaki Rokushakubō & Rokukurumaken
(Edge Whisper Six Shaku Staff w/ Six Shuriken)



Fighting style: 棒術 & 手裏剣術 - Bōjutsu & Shurikenjutsu
(staff & throwing technique)

length: 6 ft (1.82 m)
thickness: 1.5 inches (3.81 cm)
weight: 12.5 lbs

Each metal link and shuriken is encased with black Sekkiseki stone, the purest & rarest of this stone ever to be found. Notice: It is the nature of black Sekkiseki stone to drain reiatsu. My spirit pressure is only concealed by this; as it was chiseled & reiatsu blasted by my own reiatsu during my reclusive training deep within the Sekkiseki mines as I called upon it for the first time). Still under investigation by The Shinigami Research Institute of Technology... it is yet to be determined if it is to be officially labeled as strength or kidō based. However, it is clear that Hana Sasayaki is one of the rarest of zanpakutō, and appears to be equally balanced by both power and ability. Unlike any other zanpakuto ever documented in record before, it is made entirely of tamahagane. Though the encasing in its rare stone provides some rigidity, the interlocking links allow for a generous amount of flexibility. Note: The shuriken bag is worn concealed within my belt.
Shikai Form I
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Release command: 慈悲無し、妥協無し、端ささやき
(Jihi nashi, dakyou nashi, Hana Sasayaki)
(There is no mercy, There is no compromise, Edge Whisper)


(Yes, at the base of the blade is: 端ささやき (Hana Sasayaki - Edge Whisper)

Fighting style: 体術, 手裏剣術 - Wushu Taijutsu & Shurikenjutsu
(close quarter & throwing technique)


In shikai's first form, opposite of tradition, Hana Sasayaki takes the form of a katana along with its 車剣 - Rokurumaken (round shuriken). Notwithstanding, it is worn in the traditional tachi of the ninjutsu, having its saya placed on my back, wrapped intricately into my Wushu Gi (custom sleeveless ninja uniform).

My zanpakutō's substance is the absence of light and sound. This gives me a shadow step that could go almost undetected by captain level. Truly, in broad daylight, you may sense me, but you more than likely won't see me until its nigh too late. Notice: Hana Sasayaki's blade has taken on the color and reiatsu draining characteristics of the black Sekkiseki stone.

Added bonus is the technique:
1.)来る端のささやき (Kuru, hana no sasayaki - It comes, whisper of the edge...)
Which is largly due to my increased speed; this is actually zanjutsu crossbred with shunpo technique. Its speed is so absolute, that it is quite often unseen by slower opponents, and this renders the attack almost completely silent. To an opponent approaching my speed level, this would give my zanpakutō the ability to appear as 10 vaporous swords trailing in one swipe. (If my opponent is even fast enough to see that...) Its motivation is to eliminate the threat immediately; whether by maiming or fatality. Though the sound mimics the faintest whisper when swiped through the air, any interference in its path of motion from another reiatsu weapon causes a violet spark at the instant the weapons contact. Instantaneously, during this very brief moment, Hana Sasayaki samples reiatsu from the opponent's zanpakutō. While this is not draining to the opponent's zan, it allows me to quantify the battle. Only brief contact is advised. (When cut, the opponent finds Hana Sasayaki not only draws blood; but is also stifling, making it more and more difficult to breath.)
Shikai Form II
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Release command: 無敵で静粛なる恐怖の影、端ささやき!
(Muteki de seishuku naru kyoufu no kage, Hana Sasayaki)
(Shadow of the invincible, silent fear, Edge Whisper)




段平 Danbira (Japanese broadsword) & 車剣 - Rokurumaken (round shuriken)
24" black Sekkiseki blade
4" wide at largest point
Futasujibi (dual ridged shinogi)
12" black Sekkiseki tsuka


Fighting style: 体術, 手裏剣術 - Wushu Taijutsu & Shurikenjutsu

My close quarter combat "Wushu Taijutsu" though resembling, is much different from "recognized" kungfu. Heavily accented by effortless ninjutsu movements, this is truly a self interpreted, customized style.

Current reiatsu level now triples in preparation for the next stage. Notice: I have included its intermediate appearance so you observe that Hana Sasayaki does not loose its reiatsu draining black Sekkisekki blade. In this form, as you see, the blade has materialized into vapor; yet it still cuts as if completely whole. Accompanied by increased reach, it has the fluidity of a free floating vapor. I am able to attack at will from every side so long as its vapor is visible. Even when an opponent has the ability to move the air and/or create wind, Hana Sasayaki still drains as it is suffocating to the opponent's reiatsu when breathed in through the air.

Currently I have a total of 3 techniques:

1.)来る、端のささやき (Kuru, hana no sasayaki - It comes, whisper of the edge.)

2.)話せ、端ささやき (Hanase, Hana Sasayaki - Speak, Edge Whisper)
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This command spells the end as Hana Sasayaki actually whispers audibly and can be literally heard on the battlefield saying: "総全滅" (Kaijin - Total Annihilation). This causes all vapors to lift the opponent's body, binding them near motionless as they seem to be engulfed in dark violet (almost black) vaporous fire. While all Hana Sasayaki's vapors are gathered in one place, the opponent struggles not to be stiffled by Hana Sasayaki's absorbance of their reiatsu. This technique enables me to perform Kaijin - Total Annihilation, a 177 count mid-air hit & hold combo that cuts, punches, kicks, and throws my signature "" shuriken. (I know what you're thinking, but remember, Hana Sasayaki is an all around zanpakutō having both power & kidou. Notwithstanding, it is also a vapor as well; capable of being suspended in mid-air.) (These characteristics give me the gift of airborne combat before Bankai is even initiated). This move uninterrupted spans about 15 seconds. Each calculated move is part of a disciplined equation in attempt to disrupt and disorient the opponent's ki channels (reiastu flow), all the while releasing my own which causes violet lightning to spit the sky during the length of the attack. (this pic of the sky during Kaijin - Total Annihilation shows the potential when executed in bankai)



The ending blow is a most powerful roundhouse kick to the earth that I can substitute whispering (usually taunting in the opponents ear...) BANKAI.
3.)ばんじんで闇が動く、 暗錯覚(Banjin de yami ga ugoku, Kuragari Sakkaku)
(Darkness moves on the face of the deep, Dark Hallucination)
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This attack actually is a precursor for Bankai and is optimal when followed by Hana Sasayaki's final release. It causes the opponent to enter 暗錯覚 - Kuragari Sakkaku (Darkness Hallucination), a mental illusion which enables me to attack their mind's will... literally.



This delusional monochrome dimension is a dark dessert without a moon. Yet, it is not without light.... this "perceived" light is actually a deception within itself... the ground is glowing and has the same characteristics as the black Sekkiseki stone feverishly zapping reiatsu with every step. By brute force mentally, it allows me to create a state of extreme mental confusion; and is completely invisible and undetected by any onlooker outside of the battle. Truly to the beholder, the fight would seem to progress without consequence to this technique, save the possible mental detachment the opponent may have during its execution. An unaccustomed or unaware opponent would find this quite perplexing and confounding to mid-combat progression. Stemming from mental management of reiatsu control; any injuries accepted as real during the struggle blacking out under the spell of Edge Whisper's Kuragari Sakkaku, result in actual physical wounds in reality... and you must defend yourself appropriately.
BANKAI 致命的なささやく呼吸 - Sasayaki Enshi
(Suffocating Whisper of Death)
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I still retain my Rokurumaken shuriken and all techniques, intensified in bankai as afore mentioned, but with added characteristics: Reiatsu roars up a crushing 8x as I release a sizable amount of my spirit's pressure and the entire surrounding area (1/4 mile radius) is blacked out into total darkness. The only light is the vapor from Sasayaki Enshi. Which once appeared black, now in darkness shows as violet smoke, painting a huge silhouette of his face.


Behold the FINAL LEVEL, 致命的なささやく呼吸(Sasayaki Enshi - Suffocating Whisper of Death.) Bankai pushes the envelope as my form smokes as well. Through Sasayaki Enshi's abilities I am now able to materialize into vapor mid-fight at any given time I choose. This is usually during shadow step, and may be implemented as an evasive maneuver if attacks are unavoidable and seen prior to contact. (logically speaking, the condition is that there is a way of escape, otherwise, vaporization is useless)

牽引 アウト 其の 残滓 之 生命
(Kenin Auto Sono Zanshi no Seimei - Draw out the dregs of life...)
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Now hooded, I shroud my face in shadow. Chanting in the lowest whisper, I condense Hana Sasayaki's vapor through hand moves from the obscure ninjutsu arts:

"無言 中 其の 影, 其の 声 わ 敵わない 御座る 拝聞 牽引 アウト 其の 残滓 之 生命"
("Mugon Naka Sono Kage, Sono Koe wa Kanawanai Gozaru Haibun...
Kenin Auto Sono Zanshi no Seimei")
("Silence in the shadows, The voice that cannot be heard...
draw out the dregs of life.")


I manipulate the vapors to enter the oxygen pathways of my opponent's body. (the ears, mouth, nose, & eyes). Although for this attack it doesn't cut, Hana Sasayaki has always drained reiatsu and breath. It still does now, depleting the life force of the opponent. Causing the respiratory tract to begin to fail, the heart struggles not succumb to arrest. The lungs begin to rupture at worst to the point of hemorrhage. Slowly, as life departs the opponent, the last sense that leaves is ability to hear. At which Sasayaki Enshi reverberates from within, whispering departure saying: 生命 ざり たった 蒸気 サヨナラ (Seimei Zari Tatta Jouki, Sayonara..." - "life is but a vapor, goodbye..."

Any disturbance while performing this nullifies its effect further. Someone of ample level could definitely combat it, but their condition thereafter would be questionable.
VIZARD MASK
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Sasayaki Enshi's Vizard Mask exposes the blackness of my soul yet it completely harnesses Sasayaki's vapors. All of Enshi's techniques and abilities are amplified by being augmented by hollowfication. Both Cero and Bala techniques have been added, in addition to my hollow's own creative interpretation of Sasayaki's martial style.
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ive been staring at my screen trying to work on attacks for my zan and all i get is a headache. i cant seem to think of anything that could work or fit with my zan. i dont know if anyone else has had trouble like i am.
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